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Wait. Is that really Alphabittle's last name? Not been paying attention.
Hot damn this is good! Alphabittle is amazingly hot and big, and I am super jealous of Smoked Glass.
I was the proofreader for this! Now I may be biased, but I think this is a damn good story, and don’t know why there are so many downvotes.
Very nice! Less of BDSM goodness, and Alpha's dialogue felt very natural and in-character throughout. You clearly have a great handle on him. If I had a criticism, it's that I wish more time was spent on the orgasms, so that we could really feel it with them. That said, the setup and execution was very hot all the way through. Great work!
11378094 Good proofreading! As I was reading, I thought to myself that it was surprisingly cleanly edited, especially for porn.
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Glad you liked it! It was a bit of a rush job for the contest, and to be honest, if I had the time I'd have picked some other kind of kink to work into things. I'm personally fine with BDSM on the lighter levels and it flows nicely into the goth aesthetics many of the unicorns have, but I can't help but wonder if there might have been something better to use.
One wonders how things would go after the movie's ending - bound to be some Earth Ponies and Pegasi with a similar competitve streak, no?
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Good ol' contests. Great for kicking butts and getting us to write.
Yeah, I'm sure you could work other kinks in. I think what you have worked great!