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Vivid Syntax
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This was really cute, sexy, and pretty sweet and wholesome. Loved it and hope to see more! Great work! 💚
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Thanks! I always like some warm fuzzies with my smut. Glad you enjoyed it!
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Thank you kindly!
Very nice.
Very nice indeed
Could you do something with sprout??
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Thanks! Maybe someday. He's always been a sleeper favorite of mine. What did you have in mind?
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Sprout x Hitch, or Sprout x Izzy. Or Sprout x Sunny.
Any of them is good.
ALways liked him. feel bad he's not in the show except for that one episode.
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Yeah, I'd love to see more of him. As for a story, I write when an idea strikes me, so we'll see if my muse brings me some Sprout.
If you need a good ol' fashioned Soarburn fix, though, I'm your guy.
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alright.
thanks for letting me know
Well this was a fun clop fic, I really enjoyed dude, keep it up. Also I will try to read up all that I have missed in your other stories as soon as I can.
Its about time we got more gay G5 stuff! Shame a lot of the content isn't exactly the most accessible, it always felt like there's some real potential with its characters, but there just is never enough of a show to elaborate too much on them like G4 did.
Here's hoping inspiration strikes you again for other characters. There's plenty more stallions both in the forefront and background this time, and it'd be a shame to see them all ignored.
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Glad you enjoyed it! I always try to add at least a few layers when I write porn.
And I hope you enjoy the other stories, too!
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Thanks, CGen! I'm hoping the inspiration strikes me again, too. I think there's a new season of G5 coming soon, so hopefully that'll give us some more to build off of.
Which stallions and pairings would you like to see more of?
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For those with a lot of personality shown to build off of, I'm afraid that selection is rather limited. Sprout, Hitch, Alphabittle too if you don't include half r63 like you did here.
But there's plenty more secondary ones that you could infer a personality for and develop by proxy:
Rocky Riff - hairstylist that Pipp works with, handful of lines of dialogue
Thunder - as a guard he seems to be default choice due to his throwaway line from the movie about collecting sneakers
Plenty more unnamed ones like the unicorns of bridlewood or the orange earth pony with the necklace in some of the netflix episodes and winter wishday special.
I can't say any one pairing sticks out strongly to me, but maybe one of the canon ones could do something with one of the background characters? Hitch gets flirted on by Rocky for example.
Or maybe the bunch of the secondary stallions meet up because they all have a crush on Hitch and begin shipping him with others. Alphabittle might join in to administrate bets. Gossip queens like Izzy and Pipp might join in for the fun of it.
One big benefit of reunification is that every single pony race now has 3x the dating pool volume. Perhaps do a lighter comedy type thing of the above pool of gay stallions (and their enablers like Izzy and Pipp) rate the more well-known stallions. Hitch has his own house and canonically shredded abs , but being a single dad and town sheriff is going to mean a lack of attention. While perhaps Alphabittle has a bit of a mean competitive streak while running a tea room, his age and...dance moves...would be something I'm sure some ponies would be into.
what a nice story with real emotions and adorable interactions!
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aside from the other fellow above, you could also write argyle before the main plot. he could meet alphabittle in one of his trips to the woods to explore past events.
he seems like the type that could keep alphabittle from being obsessed with games and winning too much to me, but you do what you do, i'm just spitballing here lol.
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These are great suggestions! I have a soft spot for Alphabittle, so maybe there's something there. Thunder x Rocky also seems like a great pairing. I'll mull if over, and if something springs up, you'll hopefully see it posted!
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Thank you kindly! That sounds like a great premise. I know that my issue would be not turning into an 80k, multipart novella series. XD
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Thank you! I knew one or two would slip by.
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You're welcome.