Some trust in chariots and some in horses.
This story is a sequel to Ruminations
Twilight hasn't seen Rarity or the girls in ages. But she's fine, being alone. She is 100% fine.
This story is part of the First and Only Raritwi Bomb. A week's worth of stories and art all centered around Rarity and Twilight. If you liked it, the previous story posted is Undome Tinwe's "Storefronts", and you can find a master list of all Raritwi Bomb content here, https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/873741/the-raritwi-bomb-masterpost.
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Just as good as when I proofread this! I love the effect of the interrupted letters stopping at odd points, and how Twilight's narration interacts with it. You did a great job showing her emotions.
Also, other readers, I suppose you can blame me for Rarity's letter having ambiguous meaning, lol.
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Thank you!
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Damn you! Lol.
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Great story! Thanks for posting it.
Expected them to be dead in the end and Twilight was writing to her memories. Still you did a good job capturing an emotional flood
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Alas. Thank you!
Excellent. No, that doesn't quite hit the mark... Er, what about awesome? Sorry Dashie, but I'm afraid that word simply isn't good enough, no, has to be bigger than that. Awesometastic? Mm, yeah, that'll do. Thank you Pin-... wha?
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Thank you!