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Undome Tinwe

I have a prophecy/threatening to spill into words./This growing certainty/of Over.


On a cold rainy evening in Canterlot, Professor Twilight Sparkle takes shelter in a familiar store, and comes face to face with a woman from her own past.

First-place winner in the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Context XIII, with the prompt "drifting away."

This story is part of the First and Only Raritwi Bomb. A week's worth of stories and art all centered around Rarity and Twilight. If you liked it, the previous story posted is Flutterpriest's Bloody Mane, and you can find a master list of all Raritwi Bomb content here, https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/873741/the-raritwi-bomb-masterpost.

Edited by R5h and GaraTheAuthor.

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Comments ( 7 )

Well, this subverted expectations in some oddly amusing ways.

Nice. :)

President Blueblood. Now THERE’S some apropos political commentary...

Oof. Just drifting apart and not being over each other... I feel that. And the magnetism as soon as you’re back.

Good luck to these two on their breakup and second chance.

Somehow missed the Equestria Girls tag and was confused for a bit by the mention of a unicorn from another world bringing them together, haha.

Post-school EQG is always interesting to explore, and it's intriguing reading about this off-screen relationship between Twilight and Rarity and how they drifted apart. Hope their "break up" goes well.

Maybe we'll get lucky and there will be a sequel written that'll show us this "break-up"

Ri2 #6 · 1 week ago · · ·

Or the President's impeachment.

Nah, let politics stay with morons I'd rather pay attention to the love life of Rarity and Twilight.

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