After Eric Reed and Spike returned to Princess Twilight Sparkle's castle, they found Starlight Glimmer motionless and unresponsive. Eric and Spike try to use what they know about Starlight to figure out what made her become frozen in place and "unfreeze" her.
However, nothing they do bring their friend out of her unresponsive state. What happened to Starlight, and why is she unable to break free from her odd paralysis? Could there be more to it than meets the eye...?
This story takes place after the events of my "A Giant Adventure to Equestria" story. However, it's not required to read it first to understand the story (and laugh) other than to learn the human OC Eric Reed's backstory, how and why is he in Equestria, and how his bonds with the other characters formed.
But here's the link if you're interested, and it's an 18-chapter story.
Well, I like random stories.
So thanks.
...Just got a great idea for a horror game
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Glad that gave you a big laugh! I just had to have that joke in this story
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Glad you like it!
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Not sure if I want to know what it is
Oh wow this is great! I love the part with Rarity and Starlight!
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Real glad that you enjoyed it!
Haha. Trolling stories like this are fun.
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Thanks and I think they're fun too. Gonna try to think and write more stories like this.
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Then I guess the follow-up for this would be (check PM for description).
Okay, having just read Alicorns and Beards, and feeling properly disgusted at how Twilight treats Eric, I had half decided not to read any more of your stuff. This story has confirmed my intention. I'm not even annoyed, unlike in the other case as this 'joke' was so weak and forced it's pathetic, but it confirms that your main stock in trade seems to be getting various characters to abuse your OC.
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Sorry you feel that way, but thanks for giving my stories a chance.
Best horse does it again XD
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She made it look so easy
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It's a fetish, what else could you honestly expect?
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While I really don't think this story is particularly punishing -- I've seen tons of other stories when human OCs get far worse, particularly the ones when the ponies are assholes to humans just because they're humans (don't even get me started on some of them) -- but I do have regrets on how a couple of my stories ended, like my "Alicorns and Beards" story. I especially hate how I ended my "Sunbutt, Moonbutt, Sparklebutt, I Have Questions (E-Rated Version)" story. I've even been thinking heavily about deleting it, but since some users did like it, I left it up.
Should have just tickled her.
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That would have done the trick if Eric or Spike had thought of it
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Tickling is usually a good go to solution when dealing with Gen 4 ponies.
Also your cover image is sheer perfection.