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ThePinkedWonder


I'm still a relatively new writer, but I hope you like the stories i'm able to write!

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Realizing he left something in his bedroom, Eric Reed tries to get to his room in Princess Twilight Sparkle's castle as quickly as possible. He needs to get them out before Twilight sees them and does who-knows-what. Quite possibly to him.

However, Twilight's taken the role of an Equestrian "big sister" to Eric and he trusts her deeply, so Eric having something that he badly doesn't want one of the ponies he trusts the most to see is highly unusual. What saucy thing could the guy be keeping in that room that he doesn't have his "big sis" to see, and why is he so scared of what she'll do if she sees them?



This story takes place after my "A Giant Adventure to Equestria" story, but it's not required to read it to understand this story (and laugh) other than to learn the human OC Eric Reed's backstory, how and why he's in Equestria, and how his bonds with the other characters formed, including his brother-sister friendship with Twilight. However, here's the link to it if you'll want to check it out, and it's a 16-chapter story.

A Giant Adventure to Equestria

Last but not least, special thanks to Donnnnn for proofreading this story.

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Comments ( 18 )

Definitely your funniest story thus far

Man, you're writing stories left and right

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I wouldn't quite say that. This was a story I started working on around 3 weeks ago and I just finished it around the same time as the other one.

Ha-Ha!!! That was not what I was expecting! Nice work!

But what if I want to "go in" Twilight?

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I would think twice if it's this Twilight. You might get a left hook from Eric if you do because he can be protective of Twilight when it does to guys getting...ideas.

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I mean, the title's warning me not to "go in" Twilight, so I had to express my defiance.

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Until you mentioned it. I didn't even think the title could be looked at like that. Maybe I should've added a comma before "Twilight" in the title. In fact, I think I will :rainbowderp:

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Commas are the difference between "I'm going to help my uncle Jack off a horse" and "I'm going to help my uncle, Jack, off a horse."

I was not expecting that

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And that was the idea! :rainbowlaugh:

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I thought it was gonna be a birthday present for twilight not good food

Twilight is more scared of ladybugs than quesadillas, considering she constantly ran away from them, anyway, I though what was left in the room were ladybugs anyway XD

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it didn't show in this story, but these short stories take place during the season seven timeline. And Eric's brony, so since the events of season 8's yet to happen, he doesn't know about Twilight's phobia of Ladybugs, because she never told him even though they're extremely close.

In fact, I'm actually trying to think of a way to use that fact in a future story, if I can.

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So Eric only knows about season 7, not season 8, so he doesn't know of any danger in the future, oh well, I wonder what will he do in the school of friendship, Janitor? XD, teacher? perhaps Cozy Glow could trick him, worst seduce him Xd, anyway, crazy thoughts aside, I will be waiting for sequels :D.

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