Twilight's Lustful Sleepover

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B_25

B_25 #1 · Aug 9th, 2019 · 3 · ·

Buddy. Get yourself Grammarly and The Elements of Style, but said with respect to the Spike writers out there.

mrmidnight

mrmidnight #2 · Aug 9th, 2019 · · ·

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I do have Grammarly i used it for the story

B_25

B_25 #3 · Aug 9th, 2019 · · ·

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Try it for the description as well, but much love beyond that.

Infamous Paradox

Infamous Paradox #4 · Aug 9th, 2019 · · ·

I do hope that stick is positive and not the only one!

Lesolan - Rest In Peace

Lesolan - Rest In Peace #5 · Aug 9th, 2019 · · ·

Gonna recommend getting an editor to proof read the hell out into this for you.

Shepard Dragon

Shepard Dragon #6 · Aug 10th, 2019 · · ·

Aww so spike doesn't get with twilight in the main story?

DanvilleBengal

DanvilleBengal #7 · Aug 10th, 2019 · · ·

I'm enjoying the continuity with this story and SatLL, especially that Twilight seems to finally got that stick out of her ass and cunt thanks to a bit of an intervention by Momlestia, and also that Tiara seems to enjoy being a erotic dancer (that is PC term for a stripper). AJ and RD revealed to part of Spike's harem is a bit of a surprise to me; I figured they would be fillyfoolers but it works that they could swing both ways.

I'm curious though. Who did Rares hook up with? I get that Spike had to let his crush go for reasons--primarily Sweetie Belle and Silvia--but still would know the creature that swooned Rarity and unintentionally put Spike on the path he's on. I'm sure he still sees her a good friend--that are practically in-laws now...

mrmidnight