I'm Fine, Ok?

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After King Sombra's defeat, Twilight can't shake the fact that one day Celestia and Luna will retire. She knows very well that this is childish of her. And Luna knows there's something wrong with Twilight Sparkle.

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Chapter 1 · 1st Aug 2019 · 1,009 words
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Chapter 2 · 1st Aug 2019 · 1,022 words
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Chapter 3 · 1st Aug 2019 · 1,004 words
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Chapter 4 · 2nd Aug 2019 · 1,011 words
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Chapter 5 · 4th Aug 2019 · 348 words
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Luxidnessa_

Luxidnessa_ #1 · Aug 1st, 2019 · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

I, for some reason, like every story that has depressed Twilight in it. You have my interest.

BoredAuthor817

BoredAuthor817 #2 · Aug 1st, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

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I dunno... Characters seem a bit more interesting when they go through some sort of depression.

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Luxidnessa_

Luxidnessa_ #4 · Aug 1st, 2019 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Yeah, they are more interesting that way. Or there's something wrong with us. Oh well!

BoredAuthor817

BoredAuthor817 #5 · Aug 1st, 2019 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Or there's something wrong with us.

I'll drink to that :P

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Spooksi

Spooksi #7 · Aug 2nd, 2019 · · 1 · Chapter 4 ·

Bronyshot

Bronyshot #8 · Aug 2nd, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter 4 ·

YAY also if you ever need help let me know

ZombieWarrior478

ZombieWarrior478 #9 · Aug 4th, 2019 · 3 · · Chapter 5 ·

The ending was a little rushed.

S Olin S

S Olin S #10 · Aug 12th, 2019 · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

When Twilight Sparkle and Spike were done eating, Twilight Sparkle grabbed some books from the shelf and ran into the bedroom. Spike was worried about Twilight Sparkle.
-3rd to last paragraph

I found it amusing how many times 'Twilight Sparkle' is said in full over and over like this.
It wasn't very annoying or infuriating at all. Personally, it gave me a laugh when I would read 'Twilight Sparkle' over and over like that.