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Twilight Star


I like to write stories about the shippings: TwiLuna, MoonLight, NightmareRarity, RariLuna, NightmareNightmare, ChryLight and TempestLight

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After King Sombra's defeat, Twilight can't shake the fact that one day Celestia and Luna will retire. She knows very well that this is childish of her. And Luna knows there's something wrong with Twilight Sparkle.

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Comments ( 12 )

I, for some reason, like every story that has depressed Twilight in it. You have my interest.

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I dunno... Characters seem a bit more interesting when they go through some sort of depression.

Comment posted by Lunar Blood TR deleted Aug 1st, 2019

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Yeah, they are more interesting that way. Or there's something wrong with us. Oh well!

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Or there's something wrong with us.

I'll drink to that :P

Comment posted by Twinkle_Shine deleted Aug 1st, 2019

YAY also if you ever need help let me know

The ending was a little rushed.

YAY not to seem rude but if you do a sequal can i help

When Twilight Sparkle and Spike were done eating, Twilight Sparkle grabbed some books from the shelf and ran into the bedroom. Spike was worried about Twilight Sparkle.
-3rd to last paragraph

I found it amusing how many times 'Twilight Sparkle' is said in full over and over like this.
It wasn't very annoying or infuriating at all. Personally, it gave me a laugh when I would read 'Twilight Sparkle' over and over like that. :rainbowlaugh:

Wow, much crying lol

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