Mouse nice. Like mouse. He Small Boko now.
Two murdered in cold blood. Twilight confesses, thinking that she will simply be banished. The Punishment instead? Complete isolation, no interaction with anything for a century. No sleep, no food, no water. Only her regrets
A/N
Twilight is OOC in the beginning
Trigger Warnings
Indirect Torture
Broken Mind
Forgiveness
Rehabilitation
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Celestia Solaris.....
Luna Artimes.....
You BOTH fucked up.
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Glad you liked it. I think.
really interested in this story's plot, hope you can updated often.
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Very liked
Hope we find out why she did what she did and good start
Is Spike the Dragon lord now in this world, and how will he react to what happened.
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Keep in mind that this is only the first chapter, and it will mostly revolve around Celestia’s regrets and Twilight’s recovery. Of course, Spike will show up, and possibly be quite active, but the story isn’t set in stone.
Putting this on the watch list. I hope you explain why Twilight murdered two ponies.
Update?
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I'm back! I know that the story looked like it was dead, but don't worry, it was just in a Coma! I recently got a job, and I didn't have time to even think of writing a second chapter! But now my work schedual is stable, and I'll update as soon as possible!
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YAY!!!!!
Ehhh... Okay?
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Update?
Scorpio? That's my horoscope!!! XD
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6 Months and
8 days later
instead of us deciding were it goes from the list of choices why not all three but each as their own chapter with a full recovery chapter at the end
I think this poor story is being neglected... Author should be reported for criminal story neglection, and this story should be put in the foster system.
Hopefully someone will adopt it into a lovely story portfolio, and give it the love and care it deserves.
Unless the ''It slash They'' gets around and do what an author is supposed to do!
well, that was completely horrifying!
100 years of this, I really don't think anyone could ever mentally recover from that...
the most painful and slow death would have been far more merciful than that
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Meh. Give me isolation any day. I prefer loneliness.
update ?
2 years later......
Update?
This is not bad
I wondered why Luna wasn't as badly affected, given 1,000 years in the moon. But then I came up with a theory. Let's assume that Luna's consciousness/brain was spread across the entire moon, that the moon is the same size as Earth's moon, and that thoughts take proportionally longer to travel the distances between neurons (speed of light is a constant). So if her brain was 15 cm across, and the moon's diameter is 3,474km, then 1000 years in Equestria would appear to pass for her every 22 minutes 42 seconds.
Anyway, of your options... I'd start with her slow recovery. She's in no state to talk or think properly just yet. Heck, if her restriction against sleeping is over, I'd see her immediately going comatose for days and needing a Luna-free dreamless rest.
I know an update is unlikely after all this time, but I still have hope.
Option 3, please and thank you.
This story isn’t dead, right?
I vote for slow recovery.
Its dead :(
I know its dead but I want to see 3, since your writing is amazing.
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2 days in white torture and you would be barely functioning