It was a long time coming. Really, it was. Four months and no reply. It's enough to drive anypony mad. Especially when you're in love with her.
Dear Cadance
It's as good a start as any.
I love you, but...
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Ryoki The Kirin
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This is a neat concept. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks for the comment! The concept litterally came to me before I went to bed. Then I proceeded to write till morning. Hopefully the next chapter will be out soon!
This is interesting, I'll be expecting a new chapter.
Nice work!
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Thanks, I was hoping the beggining would be interesting. Now I've just got to coninue to deliver!
Just wanted to point out that its Acres, not Acers >Ā°<
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Thanks! If you spot any more, I'll be sure to change them!
Twilight and Cadence used to be lovers before the Canterlot Wedding? Interesting twist. I'm definitely looking forward to see where this goes. Tracking.
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Thanxs for joining me on this journey! Hopefully I can keep up to my own standard and make you all happy!
This is a great story so far thanks for writing it.
now mess with our emotions as you see fit
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Now that I have consent, I shall aim with intent to dice your emotions, fry them up in a wok to serve you a dish of heartbreak. (I'll try my best!)
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Yay
Ouch, I feel for her. I wonder how long it been since Twilight has seen Cadence and how long she's been sending these letters. Chrysalis did keep Cadence locked away and took over her life for a while but I have no idea how long that was so this would be Cadence not responding.
Were they in an actual relationship that somehow petered out? Was it more of a one-sided attraction of Twilights that she never got a confirmation on?
I haven't read the next chapters, there's probably some answers to the questions I have, but I have a suspicion that there will be a wedding involved.
Getting an invitation from your ex and brother (if this is where this is going) is gonna feel like a kick to the teeth and a stab in the heart.
Who's the jackass downvoting every comment? Did a story about fictional ponies somehow hurt your feelings because it doesn't cater to what you think is right?
Anyways...
Yeah, that letter really did kick her down.
Twilight, you poor thing.
I wonder what she was going to tell her friends before Spike came in with the letter.
So they were lovers, that answers one of my questions.
It's understandable that Cadance (I also thought for the longest time that it was spelled Cadence) couldn't be there when Twilight left to Ponyville, but ignoring her letters and hooking up with her girlfriend's brother is a dick move.
So Twilight wants to tell her friends when they're already in Canterlot for the wedding? That a bad idea but it does seem in character for her. Her resentment, headache, and even jealousy (though this would be envy since she and Cadance are no longer dating) would just boil up inside, leading to an outburst worse than in the A Canterlot Wedding episode.
I wonder how the Chrysalis and Changelings fit into this, but that will be something to wait for.
If Chrysalis kidnapped (... foalnapped) Cadance shortly after Twilight left for Ponyville then everyone (... everypony) here is a victim of circumstances (and changeling subterfuge) while if it happened a while latter, then Cadance is still on the hook for ignoring Twilight.
But if the kidnapping took place when Cadance was already dating or was engaged to Shining, then that would definitely place her in the cheating asshole category.
I'm definitely curious to see how this goes, hope to read more.
Is this going to continue ;-; pls tell me it's still continuing ;-;"
really good and intersting.
hope that you will pick the story up again :)