An archaeological expedition in the Badlands uncovers an ancient structure unlike anything seen before. After they gain access to the structure, they find it remarkably well preserved, and make an unexpected discovery, which sets into motion events long since predestined to pass.
Following the discovery, Princess Twilight Sparkle sets off to investigate, invited down to the dig site by Daring Do. As she sets hoof inside the structure, it begins to awaken, but even as the structure returns to life, the mystery only deepens.
You know I haven't read any daring do stories before and I'm not entirely sure why.
But this story has piped my interest and if it's good (which I'm sure it will be) I may start reading other daring do stories.
Hmm, well, this has definitely caught my interest, I'll tell you that much.
It caught my interest, please send us more.
Twilight's butt is SO famous they knew about it ten thousand years ago!
Wasn't Ancient Knowledge a unicorn?
Should be you're.
Well this hooks my interest at least. Now to see what happens.
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Darn typos! Wait... Oh, oh dear... I accidentally made an alicorn OC... Gonna have to fix that... Let me go grab a pair of clippers...
Thanks for pointing that out, I didn't notice that in my re-reading to look for errors!
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Glad to help. You aren't the first I've pointed out to have turned a unicorn into an alicorn by accident so no worries.
That statue isn't a statue...and Ancient Knowledge is pretty dang suspicious.
Nice. I could feel the excitement build as I read.
Who is Design?
She.
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FIxed, thanks!
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Why would you say that..?
Huh. I wonder how that alicorn died 'trapped' in the ruin when Twilight was able to just melt the door.
This is very interesting. Can't wait to see more.
Pretty clueless as to what's going goon right now, but I'm pretty sure there was some sort of alicorn society involved here.
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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That is a good question. In chapter 1, I envisioned Ancient Knowledge with an Australian accent. That has since changed, and now I have no idea.
Good thing they didn't decide to use plan E a minute earlier because plan E activating just as the door opened would lead to some big problems.
Ah, finally the statue comes to life! I look forward to hearing what it has to say...
Sounds interesting, if a bit slow-paced. Some action at last. Looks like my first theory about the plot was not correct, so... Keep going.
This is good
Looks like celestia and Luna get their own parts as well.
A cloak of light
Light are photons (is photons? are made of photons? How do you say it)
More photons means more shining
Cloaks that shine emit photons.
A cloak covers
The evening covers the ground in a "cloak" of red and orange photons
Twilight comes after evening
Photons are very fast
teleporting is very fast (actually you could argue that your not moving very fast (or at all) since you bypass all the space between your starting and ending locations)
Teleporting gives of a flash, photons
You could say this is a bright "cloak"
I've got it. This secret and mysterious alicorn is flurry heart . I know, I'm a genius. I'll be taking my nobel prize now.
Chekhov's Incinerated Village?
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What? You know it's true, otherwise, it'd feel like a cop-out.
Still! You don't know how it plays into the story! My incinerated village lives another day!
I’m calling it, there’s a new alicorn(s) that will be introduced, and the princesses will face this new threat(s). This will cause a large war, the war to end all wars, an end war shall we say.
Confess: The ancient structure was built by humans.
This is a good story.
It's back
And there's an ancient and evil alicorn... . Still, could be worse, there could be two of them
i just had a thought. what if that dead alicorn is twilight only she was sent to the very distant past
Bout time you updated... good chapter.
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Yes, well, I'm trying to keep up with this story... At the very least so that I can finish it and not have this story to stress me out by being incomplete...
Although I do like the story/plot I have planned for this story and I'm excited to work on it, it's just slightly tedious... And, you know, I'm working on other stuff too. But I am trying to work on this also and would like to get back to a more regular update schedule!
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Okay.
Smart move, realising when you're outmatched, and going back to call for help. Hopefully Twilight is okay, but it's too early to really say.
Im getting a forerunner vibe from this, like halo
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I am a fan of Halo, yes, and I'll admit I took some inspiration from the Forerunners...
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All i could see in my head was the first flood level in halo 1 when i read this.
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I have given thought to writing a story where a Flood Infection Form arrives in Equestria. But, ah, we already know how that ends...
Dragon combat forms, anyone? And, of course, infected alicorns. I can't decide which thought is scarier, but the latter is more disheartening.
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so is this fic dead, or...?
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hello?
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As I have said in blog posts and in other comments, it's not dead. I currently have other priorities, and my current plans are essentially a "fall through" system, where I have prioritized in the following order to be completed: The Night's Stars, Glimpses of Regret, The End War, and finally Civil War of Harmony. Other one-shots and such short fics are not currently excluded.
It will just take time before I can get back to these other fics. Life is hectic right now.
However, I suppose an oversight on my part is failing to tag said stories as on Hiatus. I will update this.
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
Just read this chapter now. ...
I'm calling it now. It's a prison. They opened a prison cell. And that statue is a prisoner. And the prison is from the future. Future Twilight is the Warden. The unreadable language is one that hasn't been invented yet. The door with the melted crystal is the equivalent of locking the door, and throwing away the key.
Now to keep reading, and see if I am right.