Yona Yak is a yak. Yaks have a bad sense of direction, so when Yona gets lost in Ponyville, she needs some help getting back to the School of Friendship. Unfortunately, that means getting the attention of somepony who can understand her, and she learns that not everypony gets her as well as her friends at the School of Friendship do. But if Yona cannot get home, she will starve, and she will not let that happen. Luckily, she encounters members of the Mane Six along the way, so she is in luck.
Chapters (1)
Hmmmmmmmmmmm... do I detect a political inuendo
I dont even hate Yona and I love this, thankyou so much.
As someone who’s barely seen the show itself, you need to watch all of the seasons. Also, I would like to point out the large amount of racism assuming you don’t know what a language barrier is I would say the trouble she has speaking is because of that but I don’t know
This is your best stoty ever! You really let yourself go. It's too good to be on this site.
There is no point for you to write any more srories, because none of them are or will ever be as good as this one
First I was going to shrug you off as a hatefic author. Then I looked through your blog entries and stories just to see if you really waste your entire writing effort on stuff like this.
And now I'm not sure if you are a troll author or if you are a horny teenager in puberty and on hormones who goes through a phase.
The description sounds nice,
The actual fic is a shitty edgefest.
Obvious trollfic is obvious. 3.6/11 too much Mountain Dew - IGN
Hey you, yeah I'm talking about you the one who only came for the comments have a good day
9569849
That's a laugh.
*laughs hysterically to hide the pain*
9569951
Thank you, I will.
...
...Honestly, I just came in to check the comments to see why I should avoid the story. Of what I've seen... I made the right choice.
9569951
Looks around room
"How does he know?"
Decides to read the story.
Checks the description first.
Realizes this story must be good since the author is exceptionally smart.
Finished reading the description and decides to close the browser since I also read the story in the process.
It should have been a magical cliff, with Yona remembering Rainbow Dash's second instruction.
9570230
Holy shit, brilliant.
Your last story was MUCH better than this... What happened?
9569958
Yes, but it seems like people have trouble understanding what it really means. Or... something.
In all serious-y ness, (hehe) this story is too low effort to even qualify as a trollfic. The author's other stories were better in quality and at least could annoy some people. On the other hand, this one was mildly funny at times.
9570849
it's meant to be funny!!! 
didnt u see the comedy tag? 
this story isnt a troll silly!!!
9569833
You do. What is it with regarding Trump as the spawn of Satan?
My view? This guy needs an editor. Or, failing that, a healthy dose of actual MLP to watch, as this runs counter to the show's base content.
9571146
It is a troll.
9571146
I probably wouldn’t find this funny at all, tbh. So I pretty much just wasted my time trying to teach you how to become a better writer, and yet you still have characters that are out of character, or in your words. Trying something new for the characters.
I haven’t read a single one of your stories, but the comments already paint a picture of what’s going on when other people read this so called “story”.
To be honest, I know you’ll ignore this, or maybe say something “nice” to me about what you wanna do, but that’s not how it works on this site.
You my friend, are an absolute troll, and I now wish I thought of that at the very beginning. I have no idea why I didn’t, I guess I would at least try to help you get that green bar, but from the looks of it. I wasted my fucking time.
For those of you reading this, I’m sorry for being a complete idiot, but I rather take that than reading this so called story.
9573036
im not that yong!!! 
im old enough to know how to do long devision!!! 
um form your other comment, u think i am in middle school!!!!?????
9573065
Ok. What does that have to do with what we’re talking about on here?
You know what? I’m not even gonna ask that. Yes, you even admitted in your blogs that you’re just getting ready for high school. So there’s proof in the pudding right there that you’re in school, even though you’re not in high school yet.
Also, what does devision have to do with all this anyway? That’s something I don’t get.
9573335
and silly billy that was part of the april fools post!!! 
where i am from u dont get taught long division in middle school so i am totally not in middle school!!! 
oh i was replieing to ur other comment and didnt post on the right page
Uhh rainbow being that rude annoys me, Pinkie pie driving Yona to suicide, annoys me more.
9573830
But you’re still too young to write all of this! I don’t know how you managed to get pass the rules that this site is strict over. I’m still surprised your page isn’t even taken down. Just listen to us this one time, man, and I promise you! You will have us to thank later for all the advice we’ve been giving you!
You know what? Why am I writing again. I shouldn’t be wasting my time doing this.
9576925 Correct me if I'm wrong but don't you have to be like, 13 to be on here? If so, I don't see how he's breaking the site rules. I'm not defending him by any means(I'm playing a neutral party here). And if he wasn't, I'm sure he would've been banned by now.
9577885
It’s ok. I’m not too sure actually. It can be possible. But he’s writing porn probably at thirteen. This guy could be that young, or maybe around fifteen or sixteen. Who knows?
But being thirteen to enter on here? I think it’s possible. It’s just that him writing all of this porn and a huge amount of uncharacteristic swearing. That’s when he’s breaking the rules, sad to say.
9578519 I can understand the clop(albeit, a little confused) but swearing? That seems a little weird to have that rule.
9578526
Really? I could’ve sworn I read that in the rules somewhere a long time ago. The swearing, I mean.
That’s odd.
9578533 That may have been a rule back in the day but I didn't see any rule like that. You may have to ask the mods for that.
9573065
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9573036
I tried as well, and got nowhere. He just gives you rude, idiotic responses (he knows that's not what we mean). He's a troll and an idiot.
9580811
um can u plz show me where!? I try to be a good person!!! 
DeAndre says I am a great frend 
ive been rude!?!?!?
9581525
When Discord made a comment a while back concerning you alluding to Celestia raping Apple Bloom in one of your stories:
You replied with:
I think we both know that you knew that wasn't what Discord meant. You were just being facetious.
9582033
it isnt against the rules for ponies under 18 to be sexualized 
so im not sure how that was rude 
but i will try to be better for u all!!! 
i don't understand wat u r trying to say???
9582093
You're doing it-
You know what, screw this. I'm done talking to you for today.
9582101
Right? I feel really bad for you, man. I just have no idea how this clown even gets through all the hate that gets thrown at him. I just don’t get it. If I get this much hate, it would make me stop writing completely.
9584838
I think he just doesn't care. He's a troll, and the world knows it. The author's notes and comments are a giveaway;
Especially when compared to the standard of grammar in the story:
It's as if somepony else writes his stories for him!
9584991
I definitely get what you mean, man. I never read a single one of his stories. I’m interested in the comments to see what everyone, and you, have to say, and the comments paint a much prettier picture of what’s happening than this lonely kid of a troll writes. I have read his blogs, and it just leaves me absolutely speechless. I know this is asked a lot already, but how can you write something that you’ve never seen before? What really surprises me is that he knows the characters like the back of his hand, and I’m wondering how he found this site. You know what I mean?
Like, now I have questions that’ll never get answered. Cause no one will know.
9586795
You can't write about something you haven't read or watched. It'd be like me trying to write a fanfic based on the entire MCU, when I've only seen a few films here and there.
9587000
Right? It’s also like me writing a story about Unstoppable without me knowing what the movie is. Like, come on, man.
I just wish this guy can get through his head on all of this, but we can all dream, I’m afraid.
9588880
I've reviewed your story HERE!
9648807
Cause the author is a troll.
9700510
Trolls write shit. Incidentally, I've made a group dedicated to this guy's work.
9571146
Oh it’s supposed to be funny? Well guess what; I’m not laughing. No one is.