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I am taking time to think about my actions and may or may not return.

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Princess Celestia has ruled over Equestria for as long as anypony can remember, with her sister by her side for many moons now. However, one of them starts to fall for the other, and the two must decide how they will move forward in the future.

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What the actual FUCK... Did April fools come early? This was fucking... I'm not sure but FUCK. Usually I sensor when I curse but FUCK...

Celestia in canon: showed so much regret over sending Luna to the moon that one of the fandom's most popular songs (and one of my personal favorites, bias alert) is literally her apologizing for letting Luna down when she needed her sister most.

Celestia in this story: My sister just got back from the moon and her feelings for me might turn out to be some misplaced psychological representation of that. But she's a perv, so who the hell cares? To the moon, bee-yotch!

As much as Princest is a NOTP for me, it didn't bother me near as much as Celestia's reaction. I was willing to read it to see if it did anything with the ship, but that reaction just killed it for me. The short length of this story also made it seem like Celestia went from 0 to 100 pretty damn fast. I didn't see any real grammatical errors, but the pacing and characterization were all over the place. That was what got me in the end, not the ship.

Comment posted by Tycoon deleted Nov 25th, 2018

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I mean, technically the expression would be that it came late, since it's still 2018, but...

I'm convinced that this is just a reincarnation of Evictus.

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I think you meant to reply to me.
I totally agree with you. I was just being a smart ass and saying that I think the correct saying would be that April's Fool came late, since April's Fools has already passed this year.

I.. I, This Is one of the most touching stories I ever read *cries uncontrollably*

Wtf is going on

So what was the moral of this story?

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Is that song the Luna remix by SuperPonyBeat?

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Nope, though that one's good, too. I was referencing Lullaby for a Princess here.

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I'll give it a listen. I'm not sure if I've ever heard it.

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Have fun and try not to cry.

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I did. By Celestia, it was beautiful.

Well... I didn't expect this to be so dark... This is REALLY unsettling... Wtf?

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