Sonic the hedgehog was fighting Dr. Eggman and fell unconscious. The next thing he knew, he was in a foreign world. When he wakes up, he sees the love of his life and decides to ask her out.
I am taking time to think about my actions and may or may not return.
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Wut...
A surprising number of sonic crossovers have been cropping up recently.
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And none of them good.
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I'm not even going to give this the benefit of a read. I'mma give it to Blanc.
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Oi. This one's the third in a week.
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>sonic fandom
>good
I see what you did there.
Ouch.
Do you think God stays in heaven because he too, lives in fear of what he’s created?
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I'll say. It's Sonic stories like this that give all other Sonic stories on this site a bad rep.
sorry guys how can i make it better
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By trying harder with your bait
please no you’re hurting me
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ummm I don't understand but ok thanks for the feedback
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>made account yesterday
>made sure to put in “2005” in your name to bait people into thinking you are 12-13
>not even a day goes by and you post this fic
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The execution could use a bit of work.
1) There's almost no concept of pacing, so everything happens to fast, though, given the characters, that might've been intended.
2) The characters are out of character. What I mean is there's no way Sonic of all people would drop an F-bomb because he's in pain, and RD seems a bit too trusting and compassionate, though, that can be chalked up to the previous point. There's no time to develop any feelings between these two who are meeting for the first time.
3) In general, it can help to try writing in a more professional sense. Capitalization of proper nouns, proper punctuation placement, etc. I suggest reading a few books and seeing how they present themselves in their writing.
Even knowing all these, it's easy to make mistakes. To take the first step to become a better author, I suggest downloading Grammarly, or another free editing software, and editing your stories there. They help get the basics down, and if you write enough, you'll probably see the things Grammarly suggests pop up in your writing naturally.
Hope you continue writing and don't let an unsuccessful first story stop you.
I'll pass.
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thanks for your feedback i will definitely try to work on my pacing and making the characters more believable! thanks for the encrudgement too
I’ve not seen a ratio like this in a long Time
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You have not seen Evictus, then.
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O'hohohohohoho, I know that guy personally
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Fair nuff, then.
OF COURSE, just like Derpi this place is all “RRRRRREEEE” about Sonic.
You people aren’t that far off from Sonic fans (and I mean that in “Sonic fans are better but not by much”, not the other way around), just learn to live with it instead of downvoting.
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I can't tell if your serious or trolling (which if you're trolling is a sign that you're a good troll so congrats on that).
You think this has such a low vote because it's about Sonic? I've literally written commissions about erotic abortion that got a significantly higher upvote count than this. So unless you think that more people like erotic abortion than Sonic, you can't possibly believe that these downvotes are because of Sonic's existence.
I like Sonic. What I don't like is fanfictions of him that put the minimal effort in, and for me to say 'minimal effort' says something. Would it have even been 1000 words if that wasn't absolutely required to publish a story here? I can only assume the author despises Sonic and wanted to give the stories a bad image.
Yo imagine if this sonic dude turns out to be Evictus...
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First off I think you can take a look at other folks stories and see how they were written and get an idea of how to form A FUCKING SENTENCE and also STOP WRITING MLP X SONIC PORN. And I think this is the best one JUST DON’T FUCKING WRITE
Where it all began...
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Hey, not trying to be mean or anything, or nosey and picky. But you're comment is very rude and offensive. Imagine if you were an author still trying to learn how to write. And you got told to stop writing period. I'd think your attempt of writing would be put away. Which. Is. Horrible. The author could one day be the best god damn author to live on this earth! Which is highly unlikely but still! This person, if they haven't already improved on their writing style, could become a really good writer. Criticism is good as long as it is nice and encouraging. I hope that you don't do this to other people. There's nothing wrong with what Sonic_Applejack2005 chooses to write. It's your fault for reading it in the first place. It's like ice cream flavors, just because you don't like vanilla or whatever doesn't mean you can or should say it's shit. Just try and help people out here! I write on another website and used to be really bad, but now I have friends who enjoy reading short stories I make because they love my writing style and my ideas. People change over time, I wouldn't say you're a bad person but you can't go around doing this.
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Sadly, this writer is no longer around. But he barely improved during his tenure on the site.
I actually kinda miss him...
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This was where it all began....
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And a legend was born
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I doubt whether any harm was done. I think this was a backup account created by an established author for a bit of a laugh.
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I mean, it has all the hallmarks. There's a group on here devoted to archiving his work. I'll send an invite if yoi'd like.
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OK.
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No problem. I'm always keen to support new authors.
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What if you
Wanted to go to Heaven
But God said
"First, you must read this fic, and give the writer a compliment and a pat on the back."
I'd rather go to Hell.
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My original comment was not replying to Sonic_AJ2005.
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Well, you wanted to.
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I don't understand. I was speaking to somebody else. I would never complement these dumpter fires (and yes, I was there when they were originally uploaded).
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I'm just saying how can the writer write such stuff
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You think this is bad? In the words of Al Jolson, "you ain't seen nothin' yet."
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I've seen the darkness.
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Good.
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k
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No worries.
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Not at all.