Rarity, otherwise known as Radiance, is one of Maretropolis’s top heroes in a society built around superpowers and amazing deeds.
Coco Pommel, otherwise known as Thorny Rose, is a mare with a terrifying power and an even more terrifying situation—the only work she can find is as a henchmare to the notorious Knitpicker.
In an attempt to thwart Radiance for good, Knitpicker orders Coco to charm the heroine and break her heart like nopony else could. But Radiance’s unwavering faith and generosity might just be Coco’s salvation...
My final love letter to FiMFiction, featuring superheroes, redemption arcs, and two of my all-time favorite mares. Coverart by TheTarkaana.
Chapters (2)
This is so good you have me hooked
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What you said
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Why do we keep running into each other
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Idk but thanks for the follow
Interesting premise. I like it!
Oh, the number of quill-related comebacks I'm avoiding...
Hmm, interesting idea. Personally, I'd have preferred a bit more buildup - actually showing Coco/Thorny and Rarity starting their relationship and Coco developing some genuine feelings for her rather than jumping in at the tail end of Thorny's plan. I get the impression you wanted to get straight to the meat of the story - Coco's reformation - but I think taking a bit more time to establish both the relationship and Coco's mindset and fatalism would give that a bit more impact.
Still, this way works well enough and I'm certainly intrigued as to where you'll go with it.
Loose.
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They're all gonna be references to recent superhero media! "It's a Leap of Faith" from Into the Spiderverse will be one of them, too!
This one sounds incredibly interesting. I'll wait for a few chapters to come out before reading it.
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It’s a short series (about 3 parts) that should be finished by the end of this month.
I too would have liked to see the build-up for Coco and Rarity's romance, but that's just because I'm a sucker for slow burning romances. I'm interested to see where this goes.
Aw, this is your last series?
But it's super awesome so far, so I can't complain too much...I really like this!
Oh damn
Well damn and I am back fim fiction