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If I cold begin to be half of what you think of me I could do about anything I could even learn how to love like you.

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Wow this was already approved? jeez that was fast. Well then crap I dont have the chapters for Thank You, Mistress back from my editor. Anyways I know the first chapter is a bit rushed, but I will take my time with it from here on out, please give this one a chance, guys.

Pretty good start. Looking forward to more!

I was seriously expecting a wait for this story to get approved, but It got approved as soon as I submitted it all most so what the fresh fuck? why did my previous story take two weeks?

Is this a sign that I should focus on this story more?! :pinkiegasp:

No. Just a sign that I'm always watching.

Man, this story just keeps making me smile.

I am surprised how fast this story exploded, I mean, 35 likes in one day? Jeez that's over half the total likes on my other story. Yet nobody seems to want to comment except myself and two other people. :fluttercry:

do both and nice work on this chapter.

This story is equal parts hilarious and heartwarming. I love it!

I have your other story in my read later section as I am currently tracking over 70 stories.

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Pets from caring people always feel amazing. I personally know from experience :twilightsmile: I happily wait for more.

Chapter four is in progress atm. I have over 2000 words typed out, I am currently riding to a steakhouse for some dinner so I either will relax with my mom or of its a real bad wait I'll work on it.

I love it and thank for the sneak peek i love your storys and cant wait for the next chapters for both stories

Dont get me wrong, i like your Storys.
But i believe your charakters are unreasonably (and -=explosively=-) ANGRY , to the point where celestia....the celestia kills a bitch...
it felt so out of place.
And the aformentioned Bitch was like ...
-=unrealisticly bitchy and evil=- .

To even talk about a death penalty so nonchalantly makes these nice little ponys feel so wierd to read.
It sometimes just feels wierd...

I hope this is usefull.

Looking forward to both stories updating. Also wondering who the futa is in this story.

It's going to be Octavia, also Is there a tag for OOCness? because if there is I feel like I should probably use it for my story. Also, would you happen to have any ideas for writing Fluffle Puff? I kind of want to add her into Thank You, Mistress.

If you add the Fluff, remember that she doesn't speak and her adoration of Chrysalis. Also, Octavia being the futa is gonna be neat.

I know that, and I plan on writing Chrysalis in like where her entire hive got sick for some reason, and died and Fluffle Puff, the only thing that managed to keep her calm and happy disappeared for some reason, She eventually makes her way disguised as somepony to Twilight's Castle, drawn to all the love, then Tempest Discovers her and brings her to Twilight, which is when she begs for her forgiveness.

I don't see Fluff falling for Twi. Chrysie maybe and Fluff being jealous certainly, but not Fluff falling for Twi. Also I assume this is later on as Tempest has yet to make an appearance.

Yeah it's later on, and as for Fluffle Puff falling for Twi, in the first web comics on Fluffle Puff's blog had scenes where Fluffle Puff loved Twi, but I do see what you mean and all, I may not write her in because I don't want any conflict between Twilight's pets at all.

She has four main pets which are Trixie, Starlight, Sunset, and eventually Tempest

You could have Fluff and Chryssie become friends with Twi and her pets if you still want to include Fluff, as well as their roommate that creepy red pony whose name I don't know.

Her name is marksaline the necromorph queen

Also, have you gotten any of the references in my stories?

I haven't been looking for references, so I probably overlooked them. I'll try finding them later.

holy fuck i love what youve done with vinyl great work so far cant wait for more!

I've got another story that is master/pet if you want, It's called Thank You, Mistress. Also what exactly do you mean by bizzarely kinky?

There's none of that in either of my stories

Did you get any of the references I made in the story?

wish i could pets and rubs too ;-;

i think you did great with the sex scene, i hope octy isnt fertile ;-; also vinyl equals cat

Vinyl definitely does equal cat. Also as for Octy being fertile....stayed tuned...FOR THE NEXT EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z! lol

Have you seen my other story Thank You, Mistress? if you have, would you like me to send you a sneak peek for the Vinyl and Octavia scene I have written out for next chapter? Even if you aren't caught up or haven't scene it yet, it doesn't ruin the story if you want me to send it to you. Maybe it will convince you to read the story if you havent read it yet.

no i havent read that one yet i think i should though

The idea is neat, but I'm not really a fan of the reference jokes. Also, this could really have used an editor. Lots of really tiny mistakes that are like speed bumps on an otherwise smooth drive.

"You really, really like it when I do this, don't Vinyl?"

don't YOU

So at first I really enjoyed this story....

But now it feels a little creepy to me....

I'm sorry you feel that way. I don't intend for it to come off as creepy.

If you are concerned about the Master/Pet relationships in the story, The way I have it written or at least want it to be written is that somepony loves another pony so much, that they give themselves to the other pony, literally. The ponies that become pets are still their own pony, the just REALLY love their Mistress/Master. Nopony other than their Mistress can tell them what to do and there is absolutely no abuse in this story or in any of my stories unless it's blueblood getting tortured.

No problem. Just felt a little off that Vinyl would be that into pet play.

But whatever. It's a good story

*squee* yay more vinyl and octy!

Ok, that is cute. Here's a Fluttershy.:yay:

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