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Not bad, but for the tags wouldn't it make sense to put a human one since in the story the word hands are in it? Not to mention slice of life and possibly a dark tag as well.
4720526 Done! ^^ i hope you enjoyed the story!
4720531 of course I hope you didn't mind criticizing, but since there's a master and slave relationship going on here the dark tag would of hint some dark moments here and there, and from what I can tell there no journey of adventure and just a usual day thing the slice of life tag makes sense as well, and finally since the word 'hands' are in this story it would make sense to put a human tag in. Sorry Im rambling sometime that happen when Im explaining something so it'll be somewhat makes sense people when I type.
4720545 No its fine, I appreciate it!
4720553 okay and your doing a good job with your story, but Im curious on the setting of the world portray in the story, and maybe you can tell how her master acquired her and some more sexy moments? Sorry If I seem pushy, but Im just curious to see more.
4720571 Well, its just random experiences really... ill probably make those though!
4720571 Each chapter is going to be a short story about her life with her master. I may even write an on going story line as some point!
4720581 you can do it in your own time. Have fun. Trying to not get a boner writing these story. (that was a poor attempt joke.)
4720590 My master isn't into brutal punishments, so expect more like this!
4720592 I think my goal is to give everyone a boner
4720609 (small chuckles) good luck.
4720609 wait, if your going to type more, why does it say complete?
4720642 I didn't mean to set it to that, and I don't know how to change it XD
4720650 you do now.s
4720642 Never mind! fixed! ^-^
4720674 lol.
4720609 Will, mission accomplished god damn fuckering whore.
In other news, I swear , I have seen your work somewhere else.
4720949 nah... im new ^^
4720974 You shere dog?
4720988 nope
So, are you new or na?
4721298 yes... I'm new
I'm jelly. For your writing I mean. I tried writing clopfics, never worked.
4721384 I'm actually surprised myself! I've never been very good at writing...
You want to take this to a PM room (so we don't fill up the comments)
Right so, I noticed you used marehood as well as palm, so I'm assuming that it's a human and a pony?
4728279 Mhm! I am a pony, and my master is a human. ^~^
Very sexy 10/10 :D
4740858 thanks! i appreciate it!
Hmm... i'm glad that melody's master is treatin her well n' all
but, idk i'd lik to see moar before i decide on followin this 
. Til then keep up t good work 
I am curious about what happens next