If I cold begin to be half of what you think of me I could do about anything I could even learn how to love like you.
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its ok
9918280
wow....that hurt. The guy who always says the same thing Nice Work changed his response and said it was merely okay.
(This is a joke, not meant to be taken seriously)
9918642
sorry i just look at tabs on this one if it can get more views like your stories with the porn tabs i might change the ok to nice work just saying.
9918671
oh no ther'es DEFINITELY going to be porn in this. It's just not the main focus of the story
9918691
just put the porn tab next time
9918697
I changed it.
9918706
thank-you
Your headcannon of Cozy Glow is so off from her actual self I doubt even the show's version would recognize her. Mostly for the fact that she curses like a sailor.
I wouldn't think it would have to be rated M for a bunch of potty mouth but hey, I rated something teen for a lone kiss one time so it is whatever you think is best....and poor Cozy and Twilight.
9918716
Eh, we both feel that if the show did allow for cursing, Cozy WOULD be one of the more foul-mouthed characters
"There's so much 'fuck's in this story that I feel no need to give any of my own."
9918902
Then just don't read it?
9918902
Sad that you'd let a minor character trait steer you away from a story.
9918941
Never said I didn't read it. Just that cussing and murder in abundance sets the bar awfully high on what could and should not be done. Just a wierd way to start a story.
9919004
Ah. I apologize for the misunderstanding. But it's good that the bar is set high, because this is going to be a dark ass story.
You make some really weird AU's, but that's what I dig about ya
9919431
nice work
9919483
It's an Ablegabrial story.
You went in NOT expecting futa?
9919786
This is my first Ablegabrial story
9919827
Ah
9919786
What the fuck is that supposed to be? Never heard of that kind of story.
9921722
Ablegabrial is the name of the author...
Didn't think I'd have to explain that.
9921727
Yeah, I saw it after I said it.
Wasn't expecting futa there. Guess that's part the AU tag, but still.
You have my interest. However.
The technical quality of your writing is... it's not good. I won't begrudge you that, seeing as it is something that comes from experience, just thought I should point it out - it is the reason I am for now hesitant to do more than just track it, despite how desperately I crave AUs akin to this one. Finding a very dedicated proofreader or editor can be a crutch, but the only real way to deal with it is to read well written things, and read a lot.
Anyhow, please do keep it up, I'll be watching
9935245
Your Pfp is GREAT
nice work
9935719
I know right! It's by racoonsan, in case you were wondering xd
Ok what the fuck. Lethal force. On kids. Dude these is brutal and then just fucking over the top and you crossed it
9939425
They say they were lying in the story?
9939425
my bad, the chapter where they say they were lying isnt out yet.
9940004
Ok if that was just a empty threat by the guards its ok. I just thought the fact the guard wpuld jump to lethal force on two filies that by and large hadn’t even done anything in the first place. Note the stuff done after the threat to call the guard is more self defense since they hadn’t done anything in the first place
nice work
Scary, cute, and adorably powerful. Just how I'd imagine an orphan Twilight.
I wasn't going to read this but I decided to give it a try because twilight is in this but that was the only reason cause I didn't like cosy but I do now don't know why oh well
Now it's just waiting for starlight to show up...
Enjoyed the story, pretty funny
Is the story going to continue its pretty good and i wondered what will happened next