• Member Since 30th Jan, 2019
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Ablegabriel


If I cold begin to be half of what you think of me I could do about anything I could even learn how to love like you.

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never played life is strange but this sounds cool

I'm glad you are enjoying this so fa! Since you haven't seen the game before I recommend you watch Coryxkenshin'splaythrough
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k I willlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Honestly, I'm not a fan of Life Is Strange, but this story is decently put together so far. Keep at it.

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There are also a number of other LPers, like RPGMinx, or John Wolfe, or Jack or Mark

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You is right, but Coryxkenshin is the best youtuber, even if i disagree with his....last choice, if you get what I am saying

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To each their own, he's cool, but not one of my faves

it was ok and yeah make a list of days you focus on a story so you don't do too much ok.:twilightsmile:

I just saw the twenty minute demo of Life Is Strange 2. Should I write Sean and Daniel in eventually?

"This fic is rated M for profanity and sex in the later chapters"
Hmm, was there sex in the prequel, or is this rather different from it in terms of what happens?
Also, profanity is fine in Teen to my understanding, it'd only be the sex that gets it Mature.

This story has my interest and I’m looking forward to future chapters.

The correct purl meaning is Pegasi. However, considering we are talking about college students, I think it might be best if it stays like that, and perhaps have somepony correct them in a later chapter? The correct way of saying it didn’t get through to me until I was exposed to the word. Just a suggestion is all.

Also, I noticed a piece of text got repeated. What that intentional due to Max’s time ability, or was it just a grammar error?

Nice chapter by the way. Can’t wait for more

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Thanks and I'm afraid I don't see the repeat anywhere

Here's hoping this story ends up long, and completed.

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I don't plan on not finishing any of my stories, I just posted Chapter Six of Octavia's New Pet like ten minutes ago

Can anybody guess who the mystery pony is? :trollestia:

What is this a crossover of?

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"Hello, Max. My name is Twilight Sparkle. These two are my wives Trixie S. Lulamoon and Tempest S. Shadow." The one in the middle said before her eyes widened.

"You're an Alicorn?!" She exclaimed.

"I've heard of Unicorns and Pegasuses, but I don't think I have heard of an Alicorn before. Though I think I can guess that Alicorns are a combination of Unicorns and Pegasuses, right?" I asked nervously.

"Pretty much. I'm guessing you came through the world beyond the Mirror Portal, am I right?"

"Yep." Chloe said.

"Well, you came at a bad time, you wont be able to get back for quite awhile, maybe even months.

"Good. We never want to go back." All three of us said in unison.

"Oh my! Did something terrible happen?" Trixie asked in concern.

"Let's just say much worse than just 'terrible' and leave it at that, please." I quietly said. Everyone agreed to my sentiment, thankfully.

"Well, Max. Chloe. Rachel. I suppose we should get you settled in here in the castle." Twilight said.

"Hold up, castle?" Chloe asked.

"Mmhmm! I'm a princess." Twilight said.

"Wow. We've already made friends with a princess! This place is so much better than our old world. What's it called, anyway?" Rachel asked.



"Well, you came at a bad time, you wont be able to get back for quite awhile, maybe even months.

"Good. We never want to go back." All three of us said in unison.

"Oh my! Did something terrible happen?" Trixie asked in concern.

"Let's just say much worse than just 'terrible' and leave it at that, please." I quietly said. Everyone agreed to my sentiment, thankfully.

"Well, Max. Chloe. Rachel. I suppose we should get you settled in here in the castle." Twilight said.

"Hold up, castle?" Chloe asked.

"Mmhmm! I'm a princess." Twilight said.

"Wow. We've already made friends with a princess! This place is so much better than our old world. What's it called, anyway?" Rachel asked.

"This place we live in is the magical land of Equestria. I hope you like it here." Twilight said.

"Will anybody judge us for having a polyamory relationship?" Rachel asked.

"Anypony, and no, nopony will judge you for your relationship here in Equestria." Twilight said.

"Ugh, this pony stuff is going to be so jarring for awhile." Chloe said.

Heres the repeat

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Uh dude...you're kidding right?

Question... What's the original story, if you don't mind my asking, so I know the general background?

"Wow. We've already made friends with a princess! This place is so much better than our old world. What's it called, anyway?" Rachel asked.

This appears twice

I'm just gonna take a guess and say the mystery pony is probably max? From a difficult timeline or something

Pegasi. Don't let Word tell you otherwise

Celestia doesn't seem like the type to say "what the heck" she'd probably just arrow her eyes or something.
Also I'm glad I found a life is strange crossover that's not porn

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I couldnt even find one that was porn. So I made my own. I was going to put porn in later, hence the tag, but idk if I should

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I would suggest marking which sections of a chapter are porn, with maybe some sort of divider, or just making a second story for all the sexy stuff. If you want to, go ahead, it's your story after all.

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Do you have a Discord?

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No, sorry. You could pm me over fimfiction's messages though, if you want.

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I was gonna invite you to my discord server and see if you would mind roleplaying this story with me. I get stuck and rping the story I'm stuck on really helps.

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Heh, sorry. I don't like roleplaying; I'm not good at thinking on the fly.

Great work can’t wait for the next chapter

It's been a while since I played "before the storm" so can someone explain Rachel's cutie mark for me; I do understand Chloe's and Max's though so no need to explain those.

I'm willing to bet the mysterious pony at the end is Chloe's father, and the incident he mentioned was the car crash that supposedly killed him.

I just want to ask what happened with this story. Your last author's note with it said you would finally start updating normally and that was 3, almost 4, months ago.

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I uh, I thought I got out of my funk for this dtory. And I didn't.

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