The correct purl meaning is Pegasi. However, considering we are talking about college students, I think it might be best if it stays like that, and perhaps have somepony correct them in a later chapter? The correct way of saying it didn’t get through to me until I was exposed to the word. Just a suggestion is all.

Also, I noticed a piece of text got repeated. What that intentional due to Max’s time ability, or was it just a grammar error?

Nice chapter by the way. Can’t wait for more

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Thanks and I'm afraid I don't see the repeat anywhere

Here's hoping this story ends up long, and completed.

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I don't plan on not finishing any of my stories, I just posted Chapter Six of Octavia's New Pet like ten minutes ago

Can anybody guess who the mystery pony is?

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Chloes dad.

What is this a crossover of?

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"Hello, Max. My name is Twilight Sparkle. These two are my wives Trixie S. Lulamoon and Tempest S. Shadow." The one in the middle said before her eyes widened.

"You're an Alicorn?!" She exclaimed.

"I've heard of Unicorns and Pegasuses, but I don't think I have heard of an Alicorn before. Though I think I can guess that Alicorns are a combination of Unicorns and Pegasuses, right?" I asked nervously.

"Pretty much. I'm guessing you came through the world beyond the Mirror Portal, am I right?"

"Yep." Chloe said.

"Well, you came at a bad time, you wont be able to get back for quite awhile, maybe even months.

"Good. We never want to go back." All three of us said in unison.

"Oh my! Did something terrible happen?" Trixie asked in concern.

"Let's just say much worse than just 'terrible' and leave it at that, please." I quietly said. Everyone agreed to my sentiment, thankfully.

"Well, Max. Chloe. Rachel. I suppose we should get you settled in here in the castle." Twilight said.

"Hold up, castle?" Chloe asked.

"Mmhmm! I'm a princess." Twilight said.

"Wow. We've already made friends with a princess! This place is so much better than our old world. What's it called, anyway?" Rachel asked.

"Well, you came at a bad time, you wont be able to get back for quite awhile, maybe even months.

"Good. We never want to go back." All three of us said in unison.

"Oh my! Did something terrible happen?" Trixie asked in concern.

"Let's just say much worse than just 'terrible' and leave it at that, please." I quietly said. Everyone agreed to my sentiment, thankfully.

"Well, Max. Chloe. Rachel. I suppose we should get you settled in here in the castle." Twilight said.

"Hold up, castle?" Chloe asked.

"Mmhmm! I'm a princess." Twilight said.

"Wow. We've already made friends with a princess! This place is so much better than our old world. What's it called, anyway?" Rachel asked.

"This place we live in is the magical land of Equestria. I hope you like it here." Twilight said.

"Will anybody judge us for having a polyamory relationship?" Rachel asked.

"Anypony, and no, nopony will judge you for your relationship here in Equestria." Twilight said.

"Ugh, this pony stuff is going to be so jarring for awhile." Chloe said.

Heres the repeat

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Uh dude...you're kidding right?

Question... What's the original story, if you don't mind my asking, so I know the general background?

"Wow. We've already made friends with a princess! This place is so much better than our old world. What's it called, anyway?" Rachel asked.

This appears twice

I'm just gonna take a guess and say the mystery pony is probably max? From a difficult timeline or something

Pegasi. Don't let Word tell you otherwise

I'm willing to bet the mysterious pony at the end is Chloe's father, and the incident he mentioned was the car crash that supposedly killed him.