• Member Since 30th Jan, 2019
  • offline last seen June 7th

Ablegabriel


If I cold begin to be half of what you think of me I could do about anything I could even learn how to love like you.

Comments ( 14 )

Great work I it

Can you imagine working your entire life to get that one job you always wanted, but it turned out to be one of the worst things that could happen to you? I can totally emphasize with Octavia here.

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I'm glad you were able to see it that way! That's what I was trying my hardest to convey through this.

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Ooh A Patreon Sponsor likes one of my stories! I feel Important now :pinkiecrazy:

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I just like supporting fimfiction. :rainbowlaugh:

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Lol, well let me know if you want a sneak peek for chapter 2

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I will wait patiently. No rush.

This is the best opening of one of your works yet. Keep up the good work.

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You really think so? Thanks! Do you want a sneak peek for chapter 2?

Waiting for more!

Eldorado
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Your long description should describe what happens in the story, rather than what prompted you to write it. You could include the existing stuff at the bottom, maybe, but most readers expect a brief outline of the premise to help decide whether to read a given story.

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