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Ablegabriel


If I cold begin to be half of what you think of me I could do about anything I could even learn how to love like you.

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this look interesting,but why the "Porn" tag?
i hope there isn't any "foalcon" in this story

Damn Tirek, little harsh on the filly why don’t you

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There's going to be sex later. And if there's any sex with cozy, she's gonna be the one who asks for it. I'm not sure yet though

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Oh cool! Hope it'll be Twilight, Starlight or Sandbar. :yay:

Ouch that was cold even for Tirek. Though quite interested in this canon divergence and what will happen since Cozy leaving will likely lead to her selling out "Grogar" and his little alliance of villains.

it was OK but not up to season 9 yet and you know what my most favorite stories are i doubt it will beat them but 2 are tied for top spot the dragonees goddess and thank you my goddess on aooo:twilightsmile:

Te deseo mucha suerte en todo en tus ideas e animo.

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I'm sorry. I don't understand.

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I think you're putting the wrong tag. "Porn" is only for pure erotica stories. If this story is not mainly about sex, then it doesn't need "Porn" tag. "Sex" tag is enough. And even then if there's no sex scene yet, and you yourself are not sure about it, then you can omit the "Sex" tag, and add it later when you finally decide to add sex scene.

Good job so far Gabby, keep it up!

Cozy will be in for a doozy of a situation once she wakes up. Glad that she's getting help so readily. If only she had gotten it before she was sent to Tartarus in the first place.

"Everyone deserves a second chance, right? Isn't that what you taught me?"

Funny how only now Starlight's thinking about that. She, along with the others would have been happy to let Cozy suffer in a small cage otherwise.

nice work:twilightsmile: but i would like a page for thank you my goddess on aooo.

I'm guessing that Cozy's dream had something to do with her past, which would explain the sex tag. I also think that while Twilight did handle Cozy quite well she should be calling for doctors to check on her.

She went through the pros of cons of each decision she had to make right now, remembering many events. Including how Twilight and the others placed her in Tartarus, and how Tirek betrayed her at Grogar's cave. But what really got to her, was her dream. She let out a sigh before sitting up.

Poor filly has no one she could safely be with. Her best bets are those that locked her in a cage.

good chapter better than the last 2

nice work.:twilightsmile: ill make this number 6 on my list

It was kind of funny as it started out as 'The Beginning of the End' before the sudden tonal shift.

"I've heard of you." Sombra said in his stupid voice.

Damn, firing shots at sombra already.

The sounds of hoofsteps were heard as the new creature began coming closer until he was in full view. He was tall and blue and looked like a goat. "I am!" He shouted. "You may call me....Grogar." He said as he surveyed each and every one of them with his eyes.

Is this discord pretending to be grogar, or is this the real grogar?

Tirek stared at her for a few seconds before bursting out into laughter. "Heheh....heh...you...you seriously didn't put it together that I was using you!? Hah! That's rich! I would have gotten out and taken all the magic for myself if you hadn't failed!"

I honestly thought she got betrayed by an actual friend.

putting a blindfold on the creature closest to her, which happened to be StonedBar, I mean, Sandbar!

I honestly wouldn’t have put that together.

Twilight smiled down and her best friend and kissed her forehead. "You're right as always, Star." She said before looking at everyone.

Is she taller than starlight?

"I have her hooked up to some IV and all the standard stuff, and her condition isn't dire, but I recommend that you let her rest and recover here until she looks like she did last year." Redheart said.

Last year?

Cozy paled at those words and struggled even more than before. Her wings twisted and popped with every movement, but she would get free! "Let go of me! I've done nothing!!!"

I think there’s a grammar mistake.

Cozy took a deep breath as she made her decision. "I have something to tell you. Something really important."

Is she gonna tell her about the dream or grogar?

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It's been a year since School Raze, and yes she is taller

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I haven't decided if it's discord or.Grogar yet. Also, I haven't decided if I wanted to have her be betrayed in the pst or not

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We shall see~! *evil laughter*

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So twilight is the princess of equestria?

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I’m gonna guess neither?

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No, I just feel like there's been a year long gap in between season 8 and 9. The kids do say "Last Year" so...

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you'd be wrong guessing that.

So what’s the time table to this story next update?

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Whenever I get my life together and figure out a way to destroy my writer's block for mlp stories

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Oh good luck 👍 then so many good story’s to keep me busy

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If you ever get bored of my mlp stuff, I have a few stories up on archiveofourown. I'm mostly focussing on my undertale story right now :twilightsheepish:

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My only request is that you leave a kudo and leave coments. If you have any constructive Criticism for it that's even better! I'm posting it to both Archiveofourown and recently fanfiction.net

I’m guessing the main romance is Smolder x Cozy Glow?

While Smolder is trying to mend her relationship with Cozy Glow is nice and all. But we are nearly forgetting of another person ( Or rather a pony ) that shouldn't be this harsh to Cozy as well. And that is Luna right here.

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I didn't know what to do with her when I had her show up. I was stuck for months with that, eventually how I had her behave was all I could think of. And she's putting up a facade, she wants to be angry with Cozy Glow, but she sympathizes with her because of Nightmare Moon. I'll probably have a scene where they talk it out in another dream.

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Yeah, that was exactly the main problem I have here. I just find it hypocritical for Luna that while she can be mad a Cozy Glow all day. She ain't no better in the end either, considering her own dark past as Nightmare Moon.

At least Starlight Glimmer figured it out earlier, that she and Cozy Glow are almost the same in villainy.

You have an interesting thing going on between Smolder and Cozy here. Hopefully They'll grow a bit of sense and not send Cozy back to Tartarus.

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I plan to have them be smart

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I have other stories I'll be updating first. Next up is the remake of Thank you, Mistress

So is she gonna tell everyone what the other villains did to her? Because she probably should.

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