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They said I'm stupid, but at least I'm an idiot!

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Princess Celestia and Luna announced their retirement and Twilight Sparkle to be their successor, and ascend the throne of Equestria. Twilight is stressed about it, but her mind is focused on her former assistant at Ponyville's School of Friendship named Cozy Glow.
She finds her punishment too harsh, therefore she wants to at least try to convince her to be a good pony and release her from Tartarus.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 18 )

Consider me signed up for more. =3

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Thanks - I appreciate it :D

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You're welcome. ^^

Just kind of hoping for one thing though. ^^'

Twilight pretty much hit the nail on the coffin as to why Cozy should be reformed. I like it so far, even if I can't help but feel bad for Tirek. Can't wait for more!

Genial, me preguntó que rumbo se llevará la historia, espero poder ver más 😊

Twilight ordered - "Write a letter to the Elements, Celestia, Luna, and Starlight to come to the Cutie Map room. It's urgent"

Does she really need to send a letter to Starlight? Because the two of them live in the same castle. So it’d basically be the same as sending mail to your own house.

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I know that but in this story she is in school and that's why Spike has to send her a letter to come there.

It does indeed seem quite logical that Cozy would not know about the potential consequences of draining magic if for no other reason then it would negatively effect her as well. Cute chapter!

Luna said, then put her hoof under Cozy's chin and lifted it, making filly's auburn eyes meet Luna's turquoise eyes

I feel I should point out that Cozy’s eyes aren’t auburn they’re scarlet.

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You're right - corrected
Thanks for letting me know

It's been awhile since I've actually READ Other fanfiction. I usually just write nowadays. But I think this was a good choice as my first story to read in....honestly, years.

It was on the similar tab to one of my stories, A Cozy Redemption, so I decided to give it a whirl!

Great choice on my part, I look forward to more, friendo~! Have like, fave, and a follow from a fellow author!

I figured the skull Cozy Glow had was fake, because I’m pretty sure ponies would be concerned if it wasn’t.

Great history! I would like more stories like this!

everyone are braindead. it's pretty accurate to the shows but come on!

"Since Celestia sent me to Ponyville, I've been learning friendship with my 5 best friends" - she smiles warmly at mentioned ponies and resumed speaking - "but often we were teaching others about friendship and show villains that there's a better way than serving the Darkness. Sure - some creatures were rotten to the core and so - irreformable like King Sombra, Tirek, or Chrysalis, but Cozy's different. If we can reform powerful creatures like a time-traveling dictator" - she points at Starlight, making her look away in embarrassment - "or even Discord - the god of chaos, then I'm pretty sure we can handle little pegasus filly"

...If you truly think that your little scheme is going to work...then you are every last BIT as naive, idiotic and braindead, if not moreso, then you were when Celestia started you on this little charade, and you have my pity.

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