You have my interest. However.

The technical quality of your writing is... it's not good. I won't begrudge you that, seeing as it is something that comes from experience, just thought I should point it out - it is the reason I am for now hesitant to do more than just track it, despite how desperately I crave AUs akin to this one. Finding a very dedicated proofreader or editor can be a crutch, but the only real way to deal with it is to read well written things, and read a lot.

Anyhow, please do keep it up, I'll be watching

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Your Pfp is GREAT

nice work

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I know right! It's by racoonsan, in case you were wondering xd

Ok what the fuck. Lethal force. On kids. Dude these is brutal and then just fucking over the top and you crossed it

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They say they were lying in the story?

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my bad, the chapter where they say they were lying isnt out yet.

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Ok if that was just a empty threat by the guards its ok. I just thought the fact the guard wpuld jump to lethal force on two filies that by and large hadn’t even done anything in the first place. Note the stuff done after the threat to call the guard is more self defense since they hadn’t done anything in the first place