(Takes place prior to the events of "The Best Gift Ever" since Mud Briar was seen with the Pies.)
Maud Pie couldn't be happier now that she has an amazing boyfriend like Mud Briar, and Mud Briar is happy to have a pony like Maud who not only understands him but technically shares in his passions.
However, Maud's parents have learned that their second oldest daughter has taken a boyfriend and are quite curious to meet the potential son-in-law. But Maud hasn't told them what Mud Briar is like.
Mud Briar accompanies Maud, both out of a desire to see the rock farm she grew up on and to be a supportive boyfriend for his special somepony. He doesn't seem nervous, but he hasn't been told what Igneous Rock and Cloudy Quartz are like.
Will this trip back to the rock farm go smoothly for Maud, and can she get her parents to approve of Mud Briar? Or will Mud Briar drive them all crazy with his technically correct way of speaking?
How sweet those two are.
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9441617 Not sure if that's appropriate for an E-rated fic.
Awesome
This was a nice take on it! Well done! It certainly has a more subdued and different tone, but I think that's the fantastic part on it, since both ponies are very unique in portraying themselves.
Don't really know what to say but - good! (I was getting all prepared to correct you on Maud's name, and then I realised i'd read Limestone's name by mistake!) And an interesting idea about the Choosing Stone, too!
This was really good. The interactions were great to read.
Review:
Plausible storyline,
Characters are, in fact, accurate.
Descriptions are good.
Good editing.
All in all, you've written yet another good fimfic.
I hope this was helpful.
Wait until the Cake Twins get involved.
9443573 I guess the question is: How good is Mud Briar with foals?
Now, I'm curious with how you're going to deal with the MarbleMac ship sinking.
9446030 I never really shipped it to begin with. The two never even interacted.
That was an adorable romance fic starring these two. Also, are those extended names for the Pie Sisters cannon?
9488558 Headcanon, obviously. It's mostly sensing a pattern, we know Pinkie Pie's full name is Pinkamina Diane Pie, and Maud's full name is Maudalina Daisy Pie. So it seems that the Pie sisters names appear to be somethingmina with a middle name that is feminine and starts with a D.
This was adorable. I can see this being an episode in some way. Liked how cool Igneous and Cloudy are in this.
A fun read, for sure! You got Maud and Mud down pretty god, especially with his comebacks to Limestone.