I like to write short comedy things in my spare time. One day I'll write a proper story, I swear.
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Cheesy Disc is a young mare trying to make ends meet by working in the local Pizza Stable. Most of the time the job's tolerable, but occasionally you get that certain type of customer...
Meanwhile, Mud Briar wants to order pizza for him and his girlfriend. Sorry - technically, he isn't just ordering pizza, but sides as well. Still, what could go wrong?
Spoilers for Season 8 Episode 3
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I literally just watched the episode, good timing (just like Maud).
Technically, if they dont have caller ID, she cant phone him back either?
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I just saw it too, and got inspired to write something short and silly,
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Or maybe she'll have to go and knock on all the doors in town.
If they don't, I guess it means they're not getting their pizza
Does Mud Briar have AS ?
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Do the ponies even have phones.
Let me guess how this would go:
Cheesy: Hello again, I forgot to get your address?
Mud Briar: Technically, this isn’t my address, it’s my girlfriend Maud’s. Also, can I hear what the sides were again?
Seriously though, great
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I'm not 100% sure, because it's never officially confirmed. But he does seem to act in quite a similar way to Maud, and she's sometimes considered to have AS (after all, she's the avatar for your Asperger's group).
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I think that's pretty much how it would go
Thanks!
I laughed, but only because as an employee who spends their day on the phone people like this are way too common, and the reaction to them is pretty much spot on.
Gotta cash in on the hype, yo.
Can...can I just....I'm sorry, but can I just grab a shotgun and shoot Mud Briar's Brains out cause he's such a bore? I've watched the episode and I was going nuts like Pinkie was. That stallion takes forever to say anything and he has a stick as pet. I just don't like him, that's all.
I love Mud Briar.
This fanfiction is just so spot on! This has a spot in my favorites for sure!
You were really quick to the punch with this one, and you did it well! Nice job!
I find your nine instances of the word 'technically' uttered by him to be paltry.
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Technically, it's eleven, if you include the long description and the chapter title.
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Thank you! I was watching the episode today, and it just seemed right to see how someone like Mud Briar would get on trying to do something like order pizza.
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I had to make sure I got there before all the Mud Briar mania died out.
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Thank you!
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The perfect response.
Mud Briar may have the most-impractical dialogue ever.
I wonder what Not Always Right looks like in Equestria.
I actually liked Mud Briar in this episode. I was honestly a little more annoyed by Pinkie than by him with this episode.
Cheesy did a REALLY good job of holding it together... Im pretty sure i would have lost my shit halfway through that call
Congrats on the feature, Alex!
Thanks for spoiling the new character. No point watching the episode now.
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Way to be a dick about it. Also you're commenting when the episode's been up on dailymotion for hours now, as is the norm for every episode released. Don't tell me you read the whole story before watching the ep?
Needs even LESS emotion!
...what kind of pizza place also sells fries?
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Pizza Hut?
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Sorry about that. I did add the spoiler warning at the bottom of the description for people who hadn't seen the episode yet. Assuming you didn't actually read the story, all it spoiled was the fact that there is a character called Mud Briar in the episode - not any actual details of his character or the plot. And, for what it's worth, I would still recommend you watch it, because I actually thought the episode was quite enjoyable .
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That's true, a lot of them sell potato wedges instead, at least around here. But Pizza Hut, I'm pretty sure, sell them.
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Thanks B :)
This pony deserves a salary increase. Great story.
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it a pizza restaurant chain in the UK
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Sarcasm is lost on you, isn't it?
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Oh. My bad, I thought you were being serious.
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It doesn't work in text.
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No no, I am miffed that the character got spoiled, but I'm still going to watch the episode. I mean I need ideas for animations for my YouTube channel so there may be something in it for me even if the story doesn't work for me.
I'm sorry for any trouble I might have brought up from my poorly construed comment, Alex. If it means anything this story is okay. Not my kind of fanfic to be honest but I'd take this over the standard cliche clopfic gimmick this site is famous for.
I hope there's no ill thoughts or problem between us, Alex.
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I know that, but I keep thinking that people will look at my comments and see the sarcasm or joking nature behind it. It's a dumb thought process on my part. It's gotten me into trouble before and I never seem to learn.
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Not at all :)
And thank you for reading it, especially if it's not the sort of thing you'd usually read
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Hey, no problem man. I'm just glad to know there's no trouble between us.
I guess I might as well go check the episode out now then, I suppose. I assume it's on YouTube to watch as of now, right?
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Either on there or on Dailymotion, I would assume.
This was funny. I'd say sou struck the perfect balance with the conversation.
I actually found this variation on the shtick more entertaining than the episode's. Mainly because I'm okay with Cheesy Disc's suffering, but not poor Pinkie's.
Does Mud Briar remind anyone else of Animated James? (Mane & Attitude?)
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Actually, now that I think about it, yeah.
Mudbriar's going to be technically dead if I ever meet him.
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The author literally said that there was spoilers so why bother reading it? It's your own fault.
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I'm not going to dignify that comment, if you can't be be bothered to read my replies.
Hmm, it was bad, but technically it was bad because the character was so one dimensional in the source that this is a good and faithful recreation. So it was technically a good writing of a bad character.
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Technically, Casey's serve potato wedges, and those are technically fries.
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Sarcasm doesn't transition well over in text... you cant hear the tone in the voice.
Now... tell me, was I being sarcastic with this
or was i being serious.
You tell me