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NorsePony


I am not a person, but I play one on TV.

Comments ( 21 )

Damn, that was hot. And very in character. Love the safe, sane and consensual stuff as always, especially the bit about checking in. It seemed exactly the type of thing Fluttershy would do, if Fluttershy was into dressing up as a vampire and doing D/s play with Rarity.

Yeah, hilarious and fully in-character. Of course, the irony of it all is that Rarity would likely be the vampire for real, with Fluttershy as the thrall. :raritywink::yay:

I noticed a typo in the title. 'Cometh' is spelled wrong. :twilightoops:
It should be 'Cummeth.' :trollestia:
But seriously, nice fic! :scootangel:

Short, sweet, hot and sticky.
AKA just right.

Wow hot and suprisingly in character not to mention hilarious xD great short story upvote!

I can't help but find this just adorable. Cute short. The end with Rarity making Fluttershy reach her climax was a bit vague in whether she came on Rarity or not, til you read the part with riding the wave, yet no mention of Fluttershy's body exploding all over Rarity's face. You can picture it, works fine, it was just the tiniest bit vague.

Lovely short, it played out quite well. Giggles were had with the safe words and Fluttershy not wanting Rarity to release yet lol 'was that too much' she wondered? Cute.

One word describes.: D'AWWWWWWWW.
Clopfic that makes me say that? Cannot believe. But it happened. Good job norse.

I like this. thumbs up for you :twilightsmile:

HOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOT!!! I don't really like vampony stories, but seeing as it's just roleplay, it was as I said earlier, hot.

I had a hearty lol. Also: freaking adorable. Well done.

2238500 Why not both?

2233562 Thanks! : )

adorable and hot, difficult combo.
well done.

i love this little story, not only because it is decidedly erotic, but also because it perfectly illustrates a bdsm scene/relationship as it SHOULD be (i'm looking at you, "fifty shades of grey").

3313957 Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it. : )

Apparently this is canon now.:raritywink:

( Mimics george takei. ). OH MY...

The creature hissed, snorted, then burst out in giggles. “Rarity, that’s too silly.” The creature’s blue-green eyes widened in alarm. “Um, it’s convincing, though?”

In my experience, it is so difficult to make this sort of thing work without it dissolving into a fit of laughter. It reminds me of the one and only time that I attempted role-play with my wife. She has a serious rape fetish, and she asked me very insistently to indulge her. She said that she wanted me to surprise her one day when she wasn't expecting it, kidnap her, tie her up, and go rough on her without actually hurting her. I felt guilty about having never done her fantasy before, so one day, weeks later, I put a plan into action. I pretended to go to work until she left for her job. Then I doubled back home and hid in the bedroom before she came back. She laid down in the living room and started to read, not realizing that I was there. I made some strange scraping sounds that she later told me unnerved her, but she did not get up to investigate. Getting impatient, I snuck into the living room. Luckily, she was looking the other way. I quietly crept up to her and then grabbed her around the head and neck like I was trying to keep her quiet. She, still not knowing who I was, responded by flailing her arms and making a sound like, "Woo-oo-hoo-AH-hah!" It was hands-down the funniest thing I had ever heard in my life. I collapsed onto the floor laughing for minutes. The game was a complete loss. She was none too pleased with my attempt, but she never asked me to do that again. Needless to say, Fluttershy in this story handled it much better than I did.

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