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I'm somewhat nervous to do this, but I figured I would see what you had to say. I made a new story (it will eventually cover the other story from a different perspective. Hopefully it will do a better job.) You gave pretty rough, but sincere and honest critique of my previous story, and I was wondering if my new story is any improvement at all.

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