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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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Perfection~

There's a non-consensual tag. Please use it. And no, mind-controlled ponies cannot give informed consent.

To the author - Well... that's a lot to take in story wise. I don't know what say here. *in an unsure voice* good job:derpyderp1:
p.s: btw i've never used emoticons before and even know how hell these things work. you can laugh at me for that!

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Okay, yeah. I wasn't a hundred percent sure whether or not the tag was needed, but you're right. It has a Non-Con tag now.

Well this was a very fun read, I hope you will do a sequel with this, can't wait to see all the guards to become broodstallions for Chrysalis. Keep up the good work.

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I already have some saucy ideas brewing as we speak~

Is this a sequel by any chance? or the start of one?

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sign me up for the guard then:rainbowwild:

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Not necessarily, no. I may have been inspired by a couple ideas by others, but this is it's own story. There might be sequels later though~

This. This is the kind of mpreg chrysalis shining story I've been wanting to see for years! Oh man thank you! :pinkiehappy: I only wish it was longer though.

One thing I was slightly confused on, did Shining really did take eggs from her once before? Or were those just false memories Chrysalis planted in him to make him more compliant and willing? If it's the latter i'm curious what other things she'll do to his brain in future works.

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if you do sequels I would love to read them and hear about the ideas for them. I hope we get to see a scene of Shining laying some of the eggs too. :rainbowwild:

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Welllllll... Let's just say that the Prince won't be afraid to help out his new Queen by any means necessary. And given his military background, his strategic mind might help quite a bit in regards to finding the right targets~

Also, thanks for the kind words! This story wouldn't have been possible if it wasn't for the fetish poll I held on my Patreon page. And given the positive reception I've gotten over the past couple days, I can't say I have any regrets writing it~ ;)

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and the memory thing? was that false or real?

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Considering how mysterious and cunning Queen Chrysalis can be, I don't think it'd be appropriate to give a clear answer for the time being. :3

I loved it I love changeling mind control story’s and you feel them so well with them being dominant and always able to influence others minds and nations bidding in the shadows moving the strings makes me so pleased to see it

A true thrall

I hope there's a sequel that delves further into this story

Shining Armor indeed had many plans to accomplish, but none of them were from his own accord. With Chrysalis’ magic tightly encased around his mind and conscious like a mummy’s wrap, there was no way the Prince would’ve been able to ignore what she commanded him to do. However, with his own magic being used to conceal his Queen’s control, and his heart thundering in desire to repeat what he committed outside the Empire’s borders, it seemed that the pony didn’t mind following his chitinesque Master towards her future instead of his own.

I would think they would be of his own accord. At least that's what he believes. That Chrysalis brainwashes and and convinces him of the lie that the walls help keep him focused and keep his priorities in the right places.

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