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dirty little secret


I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)

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This story was chosen by my Patreon supporters! Every month, I take suggestions from my supporters and let them vote to determine which story I'll write next.

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Oooo, now this is very different. That was creepy and I feel uncomfortable.

I like it!

6343802
Heh, yeah. Rather than write Just Another Clop Story(tm), I thought I'd be a bit artistic about this one and have some fun with it. ^.^ It'll be interesting to see what people think of the style.

oviposition

Totally gonna have to read this later.

6355717
You won't be disappointed. ^.^

Holy shit man.now this is quality .

Well then. THis has made me horny -_- fave and like anyways XD

I remember reading a book in high school that had a chapter written from the perspective of a mentally disabled person. This reminded me of that.
That is not an insult, lol.
Rather, I'm saying that showing how the mind control was affecting his thought process was well done.
I'm glad to be the first thumbs up.

6355758
Thanks. ^.^ I put extra effort into making this one special.

6355778
Glad I could help with that. :raritywink:

6355791
Yep, it was a lot of fun to write this way. ^.^

Oh, finally another futa on male story on this site ;-;

Great story, i would love to see a sequel to this:pinkiecrazy:

6355991
I'm actually thinking about doing a SFW sequel dealing with preggers Shiney.

6355917
I know, it's about time, right! :rainbowwild: There's so few of them!

6356189
I love your Oviposition stories, Now only if you were planning to include that mare in Changling sex ed to lay hers :3

6356230
But only the queens have eggs! :raritydespair:

6355864 Thank you for making a good story :twilightsmile:

Minor note, pretty sure "fiancee" has two e's (in the description). But looking forward to reading this!

6356403 What about that mare she told was going to be a mother?

6356189 I'm looking forward to it:pinkiehappy:

6356447
Oh, I'll just fix it by putting in the accent properly.

6356511
You mean right after implanting the eggs into her?

Sup

Sorry man, I like your work but this is way too out there for me

6359677
Fair enough. ^.^
The premise was chosen by my Patreon supporters. I tried to have fun with it.

MMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmm........ MMmmmmmm MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMmmmmmm :)

6360756
I'll take that to mean you liked it. :rainbowlaugh:

6361081 You know me... I like... filler. :P

6369250

you nailed it

And so did Chrysalis! :raritywink:

Very instant like for getting almost all of my fetishes in one story:yay:
Love<3

6498399 r63;) and probably one or two more but I am sleepy
also fetish of the second chapter

I dig any good stuff with Chrysalis and MC'd Shining Armor. I also really like the way you handled the repetition and the worship aspect of the relationship. Pretty good stuff!

6583646
Yeah, this one was really fun to write. ^.^

Hooooooooly crap that was creepy! The writing style was so dead-on, you could really tell how hypnotized he was. Have an upvote!

6356189 All of my yes for preggers Shiny story.

Now that wad an interesting take on the whole "Chryssie and Shining have a kid" genre. But I do want to read a sequel story.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Ok, wow... this... this writing style is incredible. The prose is so fluid, so perfect for describing a mind-controlled thought process! I'm greatly impressed! Oh, this was a great read. It's going straight into my... 'special' favorites folder, for sure. :pinkiecrazy:

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Heh, I did have fun with this one. ^.^
And if you liked this, maybe you'll also like A Frog's Life... where I also had fun with the style.

That was...different...:twilightsheepish:

6842263
Not your everyday kind of clop, is it? ^.^

This is honestly my favorite smutfic. I usually don't get interested in them, and when I do it's pretty rare I read one all the way through. But this one I enjoyed thoroughly.

6981198
Heh, yeah. I had fun with this one. ^.^

Non-con in general usually gives me a squicky feeling, but this story ticked so many other boxes for me that I hardly cared.

Really shining, it was the buffet?

Mind control from the first person. This is incredible and very well written. Nice!

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^.^ Thanks! This one was pretty fun to write. I'm glad my patreon supporters insisted on it!

Will we ever get a sequel to this?

7640138 Is that sarcastic, or the honest truth? :rainbowhuh:

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