If it can go wrong, it's happened to Tristan Shay.
After his mother dies due to illness, the friendless, twenty-two year-old college dropout is forced to live on his own in an old house he's renting just outside of the city. One day, he receives a scroll in the mail from someone who calls their self "Princess Celestia", saying something about seven guests who will be taking a month long field trip to "his" world. This has to be the weirdest prank mail he's ever gotten...
Very first story ever. No sad rating due to only a few paragraphs of sad stuff that comes later in the story and the Teen rating is for light sexual content and possible flirting/shipping. Constructive criticism is always welcome :)
w00t. wanna read more...it's short..really but i love the story idea
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Lol, there's a lot more to the story yet to come, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
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my curiosity has been peaked
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Lol, glad to hear that!
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I do believe I shall enjoy this. TRACKING ENGAGED!
You seem to be jumping awfully fast into this.
Slow it down a bit. it would make it a bit more realistic. Then again, it's a story.
I still enjoy it, those were just some small faults.
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Thanks for your input. I was actually wondering if I was speeding through a tad. But none the less, I appreciate the comment. And I'm glad you're enjoying the story
Shit's gonna hit the fan once they find the ham...
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Lol, it just might
:3 First.
Dis chaptah b gud sheyt.
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I tried taking your advice the best I could. Not sure if I followed that completely through or not, but I'm glad you like it, regardless!
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I meant that you should slow down on things like the 'anatomy' thing in the first chapter. that joke would've fit prfectly the next day or o when Twi wants to learn about humans. Not ten minutes after they get there.
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Ah, lol. I understand now. I originally intended that statement to be something that AJ thought Twilight was implying, not necessarily Twilight hitting on Tristan, but in retrospect, I can definitely see your point :)
Observing and waiting. Let's see where this goes.
Well that was a lil awkward
but still gets 5/5
Meanwhile at the neighbor's house across the street
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There could have only been one way to make this funnier.
Pause for dramatic effect...
Awkward boner-poke.
good chapter bro!
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Lol, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Excellent work spazzy.
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Thank you!
I liek it. And it looks like somones got a crush

Well i really liked this chapter, good job
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Lol, thank you. And who knows?
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it
I Applaud you for being so good at setting up harems.
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:3
Good chapter
...Wait'll they get ahold of Red Bull.
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Thanks!
Ha, AJ stealing peeks at her new chest puppies. I think she likes them.
a man gotta do what he gotta do, FIRST!
now...
loving this story so far, cant wait for more
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Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Dammit Twilight quite taking his smokes! Those are expensive!!!!!!!!
:3
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Great chapter as always
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Thank you!
I'm kicking myself for passing over this story for so long its awesome +3 manly
for you
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Thank you! Glad you're enjoying the story so far!
*sips some coffee and waits staring at the screen*
I would have laughed so hard if they had "accedentally" lost track of time in the clothes story
oh and thanks for this chapter it maybe a little on the short side but at least it satisfes my inner MOAR! monster.
keep up the awesome work mate
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Thanks! I will!
1142255 my inner moar monster thanks you. lol
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You have sated my hunger for casual comedy/romace/(and/or)adventure stories. Woops, look at the time, i'm hungry again.
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This story does not have enough recognition. For that you get my bi-annual moustache.
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Thank you! Moustaches are always appreciated!