• Member Since 11th May, 2012
  • offline last seen Aug 28th, 2015

Spazzy Jamz

I'm a 22 year old musician from Jackson, Ohio. I like to read, write, and play video games in my spare time. I'm happily taken. Short and sweet.



If it can go wrong, it's happened to Tristan Shay.

After his mother dies due to illness, the friendless, twenty-two year-old college dropout is forced to live on his own in an old house he's renting just outside of the city. One day, he receives a scroll in the mail from someone who calls their self "Princess Celestia", saying something about seven guests who will be taking a month long field trip to "his" world. This has to be the weirdest prank mail he's ever gotten...

Very first story ever. No sad rating due to only a few paragraphs of sad stuff that comes later in the story and the Teen rating is for light sexual content and possible flirting/shipping. Constructive criticism is always welcome :)

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 355 )

w00t. wanna read more...it's short..really but i love the story idea

Lol, there's a lot more to the story yet to come, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Lol, glad to hear that! :pinkiehappy:

You seem to be jumping awfully fast into this.
Slow it down a bit. it would make it a bit more realistic. Then again, it's a story.
I still enjoy it, those were just some small faults.

Thanks for your input. I was actually wondering if I was speeding through a tad. But none the less, I appreciate the comment. And I'm glad you're enjoying the story :scootangel:

Shit's gonna hit the fan once they find the ham...:pinkiegasp:

I tried taking your advice the best I could. Not sure if I followed that completely through or not, but I'm glad you like it, regardless! :pinkiehappy:

I meant that you should slow down on things like the 'anatomy' thing in the first chapter. that joke would've fit prfectly the next day or o when Twi wants to learn about humans. Not ten minutes after they get there.

Ah, lol. I understand now. I originally intended that statement to be something that AJ thought Twilight was implying, not necessarily Twilight hitting on Tristan, but in retrospect, I can definitely see your point :)

Observing and waiting. Let's see where this goes.

Well that was a lil awkward:applejackunsure: but still gets 5/5:moustache:

There could have only been one way to make this funnier.

Pause for dramatic effect...

Awkward boner-poke.

I liek it. And it looks like somones got a crush :heart: :ajsleepy:

I Applaud you for being so good at setting up harems.

Ha, AJ stealing peeks at her new chest puppies. I think she likes them.

a man gotta do what he gotta do, FIRST!
loving this story so far, cant wait for more

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :pinkiehappy:

Dammit Twilight quite taking his smokes! Those are expensive!!!!!!!! :flutterrage:

I'm kicking myself for passing over this story for so long its awesome +3 manly :moustache: for you

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying the story so far! :twilightblush:

*sips some coffee and waits staring at the screen*

I would have laughed so hard if they had "accedentally" lost track of time in the clothes story:rainbowlaugh: oh and thanks for this chapter it maybe a little on the short side but at least it satisfes my inner MOAR! monster. :twilightsmile: keep up the awesome work mate:pinkiehappy:

1142255 my inner moar monster thanks you. lol:rainbowlaugh:

You have sated my hunger for casual comedy/romace/(and/or)adventure stories. Woops, look at the time, i'm hungry again.

This story does not have enough recognition. For that you get my bi-annual moustache. :moustache:

Thank you! Moustaches are always appreciated! :scootangel:

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