• Member Since 8th Nov, 2011
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Speven Dillberg


Bushfires, floods, cyclones and drought. All at the same time. Australia is trying to kill us all.

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Justin's life on Earth sucked. Horrible job, horrible apartment, horrible lifestyle and no contact with anyone you could call a friend. When he winds up in Equestria, he's more than happy to stay. But things ain't so easy where the grass is greener...

A collaborative effort between me and my friend Beese.
And a thank you to DoctorBrony for being the final proofreader. (I tend to miss things)

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 403 )

I see. I'll have to read another chapter or two to make a judgment on it, but It looks good so far.

Awesome! I always loved human in Equestria stories.

Surprisingly, i really liked this. Please add more

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

This took a bit longer than I would have liked. I should have expected this when my partner got his greasy mits on Skyrim...

Oh god I want more but I don't feel that it's going to be possible with Skyrim in the picture. Seriously though, this is as good as An American Dude in Equestria. More please! :pinkiehappy: Also at first I was a little confluttershy'd at the thing where he said "What ever floats your boat." I didn't really get it till later when Applejack said barn door. It kinda seemed unprovoked and unnecessary, but was funny once I got it.

Also, Romance tag?! Can't wait until this aspect comes into play. :pinkiehappy: :yay: :eeyup:

Ha! This Justin guy is a lot like my brother of the same name. "Why is there a monkey behind you?" "Why is there a small talking lizard wearing an apron?"

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Oh really? I certainly hope you wren't.

I gotta say, I'm always a little weary when it comes to 'human in equestria' stories (Angst much ruined it for me)
But you've got potential. Not a fan of that romance tag though. :trixieshiftleft:

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

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I'm typically wary of Human in Equestria stories myself. Most of them devolve into poorly-masked self-inserts with less characterisation than a character from a Stephanie Meyer novel.
That romance part won't appear for a while yet. I'm not entirely sure when, either. That's the joy of writing the story as you think it up.

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Is that all you ever have to say?

Ha! This looks like it's got quite abit potential. Faved and Tracking! :pinkiehappy:

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Somepony likes their SPAM a lot. :derpytongue2:

Justin is a fan of The Rolling Stones?.... I'll give this story a shot. :moustache:

:twilightblush: Would you look at that.
I guess I am just really good at writing anything that involves lots of dialogue without having to worry about characters moving much. :yay:

Ive always loved 'Humans in Equestria' storyies, loving it so far, good with the comedy!, will continue reading!:eeyup:

I like were this story seems to be going, Keep up the good work! :yay:

Keep that kit up!
Also I want to see some romance between Justin and Twilight :ajsmug:

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

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Who said it was gonna be with Twilight?

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It's been done before, with Arddun Lleuad. It was quite beautiful.

Interesting. It seems to be a bit of a slice-o-life with a human thrown in. I can't wait to see how the characters will bounce off each other, with Justin and Twilight as the straight man/mare, and everyone else, well, in-character.

Love Twilight's reaction to Celestia's letter. Twilight could probably handle a couple o' hours' preparation if it were anyone else but a princess, especially Celestia, she'd probably consider 24 hours to be short notice.

I cannot fathom why, but the next chapter is taking forever to get done. Might be to do with Fluttershy. I want to pin down her personality, but I don't want to overdo it. I guess she's the kind of character where it's easy to screw up.

If anypony can think of a fitting chapter name, I would much appreciate it.

Umm...
Drunk Twilight? lol :rainbowlaugh:

Best I can think of is "Countdown to Deflegration"

I promise next chapter will feature a number of drunk ponies.
Also, the only thing scarier than a Time Travelling Pinkie Pie is a drunk Pinkie Pie. At least that's my opinion. :pinkiecrazy:

36969 The Calm Before the Party?

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

I said a number of drunk ponies. I never specified the number.

Usually in humanxpony fics, the pony of the humans desire is extremely easy to get, which i just absolutely despise.

You made them drunk first, i like that.:moustache:

ending is priceless

Can't wait to read about a drunk Twilight.

MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR

What do you do with a drunken pony,
What do you do with a drunken pony,
What do you do with a drunken pony,
Ear-lay in the mor-ning.

No surprise that the resisdent human could probably drink most, if not all, of the ponies under the table.
Now you've got me curious as to how they'd deal with human booze.
1 tequilia, 2 tequila, 3 tequila, FLOOR *thud*


Chapter was pretty funny and I liked how you wrote off romantic interaction (for now), yes they're just like humans but they look like animals (no offense) and that would take a bit of time to overcome the ingrained reaction to that kind of relationship. Hurry up and write the next chapter, I wanna know what happens!

Drunking pony orgy?! What? Tell me you can't see that happening.....was I alone in this thought?.....my look at the time! BYE!

can't wait for more!

but if in equestria, light booze will make them drunk in one cup, how would they react to human booze?

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I'm going with the pegasi not being able to drink as much. They have to be lighter to achieve flight, and I also feel a faster metabolism is required.
Oh, and apple cider (the alcoholic variant) is only ten percent alcohol. Most beers are less, and wines are fifteen at most.

With that "Romance" label, I can't help but feel a scene like this will be in the future.

^ Not that I mind.

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Moar please

i love this! post more:pinkiehappy:

You, my dear sir, have won the Ponynet for the day.

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