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This story is a sequel to Twilight Sparkle's Worst Day Ever

Fluttershy returns home from seeing Sunset off on a personal journey only to find an unexpected guest at her door. Amazed and puzzled, she tries to figure out what they're doing and how they got there.

Book Six of "Not Just Any Other Day".

Part of "Not Just Any Old Continuity", which includes
The Crystal Prep Chronicles
The Anon-A-Miss Saga
TimberTwi Tales

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Chapters (5)
Complete Published: Nov 2nd, 2018 Download
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BraneworldParadox
BraneworldParadox #1 · Nov 2nd, 2018 · · · Manticore at the Door ·
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I probably should have read the first part of this story... okay, I will stop being a brat and go read the beginning :D I am just impatient, and I am very simple... I see Fluttershy or a Manticore I click, but I will stop being weird and go back to read the beginning.. hahaha, it is confusing not knowing the full story! I will await the next chapter, I give you a thumbs up for a well written story with Fluttershy! You kept her in character perfectly!

Yami Vizzini
Yami Vizzini #4 · Nov 5th, 2018 · · · Manticore at the Door ·
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If ponies become human, and dragons become dogs when passing through the portal from Equestria... She eyed Silence with a hint of uncertainty. "What kind of creature from Equestria would pass through and become a manticore," she asked. "It doesn't make any sense."

Hmm... what being do we know in Equestria that’s a mishmash of animal parts, would gravitate towards Fluttershy... and would find it very easy to avoid making sense?:twilightoops:

shallow15
shallow15 #5 · Nov 7th, 2018 · · · In Search of a Manticore ·
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She channeled her geode to call upon a bear. It arrived, and she rode off toward her friend's apartment.

OH MY GOD! BEAR IS DRIVING! HOW CAN THIS BE?!

Yami Vizzini
Yami Vizzini #6 · Nov 7th, 2018 · · · In Search of a Manticore ·
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Wow, Fluttershy can organize when she has to!

CapNTilfy
CapNTilfy #7 · Nov 7th, 2018 · · · In Search of a Manticore ·
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Is that a reference to that weird video game where a bear is driving a car?

CapNTilfy
CapNTilfy #9 · Nov 7th, 2018 · · · In Search of a Manticore ·
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Every time I think of Clerks, I think of this:

Comment posted by Fetch deleted Nov 11th, 2018
Yami Vizzini
Yami Vizzini #12 · Nov 13th, 2018 · · · Silence ·
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Welp.... Something or someone is indeed messing with the girls, and not just in their dreams. One wonders how else they've been involved in things....

Twitcher_115
Twitcher_115 #13 · Nov 13th, 2018 · · · Silence ·
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Well, I wonder why "he" want to traumatize Fluttershy. Can't wait to see what's coming. :pinkiesmile:

Yami Vizzini
Yami Vizzini #14 · Nov 19th, 2018 · · · Ashes to Ashes ·
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Well, that was a change.:derpyderp2:

And now the only one left is the one we already knew was having a really bad time of it....:twilightoops:

Friendly Spartan IV
Friendly Spartan IV #15 · Nov 19th, 2018 · · · Ashes to Ashes ·
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If this fic were metaphorically a person...

DragonxFlutter
DragonxFlutter #18 · Dec 18th, 2019 · · · Silence ·
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Several miles away, Silence's ashes began to swirl, forming a miniature cyclone. They slowly coalesced into a cloaked being, its question mark emblazoned mask shining in the moonlight. The masked figure sighed, then cracked their knuckles and neck. They tapped their mask. "Mission accomplished. Returning to base."

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ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #19 · Dec 2nd, 2022 · · · Manticore at the Door ·
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Fluttershy began her pacing anew as she thought. "Clearly you can understand what I'm saying...but can you write?" Silence shook its head, causing her to sigh. "Do you know where you belong," she asked. Silence nodded. "Can you take me there?" Silence shook its head. She frowned. "How can I help you if you won't take me where you live?" Silence blinked, and Fluttershy growled in frustration as she put the palm of her hand to her face. "This isn't getting either of us anywhere," she muttered as she scratched her head.

At least your trying. :twilightsheepish:

Silence was gone.

Uh oh! :twilightoops:

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #20 · Dec 2nd, 2022 · · · In Search of a Manticore ·
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"I mean, he's a nice guy and all, but no. I don't have a crush on him." the one apparently named Pinkie said. Smokey decided that he'd heard enough, and he went back to report to Fluttershy. He caused the bush to rustle, startling the one apparently named Pinkie. Smokey returned to his fellow raccoons and Fluttershy, then chittered, telling her all that he saw.

:rainbowhuh:

https://m.

Fluttershy nearly took out her phone to text one of her friends, but decided against it. No, she thought. Silence is my responsibility. I should take care of this myself. The raccoons stopped, then looked in different directions. "What's wrong," Fluttershy asked, concerned. The raccoons chittered at her, and her eyes widened. "What," she asked, shocked. "How can the scent possibly go in multiple directions?" The raccoons shrugged. Fluttershy pinched the bridge of her nose. Silence must be smarter than I thought. That's the only logical explanation I can think of right now.

How is that even possible!? :applejackconfused:

Fluttershy heard tweeting from the sky, and she looked up. "Constance," she said excitedly. "Did you find Silence?" Constance nodded. "Where," she asked eagerly. The bird tweeted, and her eyes widened. "Wait. That's near Sunset's apartment!" She channeled her geode to call upon a bear. It arrived, and she rode off toward her friend's apartment.

Wait what!? :pinkiegasp:

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #21 · Dec 2nd, 2022 · · · Pursuit ·
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As Fluttershy traveled atop Harry, she noticed he was going through fatigue. "Oh, goodness," she exclaimed. "Maybe you should stop, Harry." She pet him on the head gently. "Thank you for your help," she said gratefully. "Now go and get some rest." Harry smiled, then walked back to his home. Fluttershy sighed in disappointment. "I guess I'll just have to hoof it," she said.

How am I not surprised she'd say 'hoof it.' :ajbemused:

"This leads me to believe that Silence is looking for all of my friends," Fluttershy said. "But none of them seem to be home. I'd imagine if my they did see a manticore, we'd all be told. So I want you all to spread out. If possible, distract him. Find any way to keep him from flying away, as long as it's not harmful. I need him occupied until I find him." The animals nodded in understanding. "Split up into groups," she ordered. "Those who want to go to Pinkie's, gather here," she pointed in a direction. "Those who want to go to Rainbow Dash's, gather here. Rarity's, go here. Applejack's, here." All the animals went in various spots. She nodded in satisfaction. "Good," she said. "Now spread out! Stay in your respective places until I get there." The animals all dispersed, and Fluttershy began her trek to Pinkie's.

But why is silence trying to find them all? :unsuresweetie:

Fluttershy had arrived at Rarity's and checked in with the animals there. "Have any of you seen Silence," she asked. The animals all shook their heads, and she began to worry. "What if someone found him," she asked, "what if something's happened to him?" The animals all chittered, and Fluttershy smiled. "You're right. I still haven't been to Applejack's. I really hope he's there." She ponied up, then took to the sky and flew to Applejack's.

And there's something I thought only Twilight and Rainbow would do. :pinkiegasp:

The sky was beginning to darken by the time Fluttershy reached Sweet Apple Acres. Thoroughly exhausted, she nearly crash landed in the orchard. She found the group of animals keeping watch, and approached them. "Please, please, please tell me you all saw Silence," she said, almost on the verge of tears. The animals all shook their heads. "How the hell can a manticore not be seen in broad daylight," she asked angrily, flailing her arms.

There's something Fluttershy rarely does. Swear. :twilightoops:

Lemon smiled warmly. "Yeah," she said dreamily. "Good times." Everyone glanced at her, and she blushed. "I mean, yeah! That was an adrenaline rush!"

Not helping Lemon Zest. :duck:

Silence was a few feet away from her, sitting on the grass.

https://m.
ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #22 · Dec 2nd, 2022 · · · Silence ·
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Several minutes later, Fluttershy thanked Harry then looked back at Silence. "I'm just glad you're safe," she said. "But if you ever, ever do that again I promise I will track you down. I will find you. And I will give you a look so mean!" She stepped over to Silence and got into his face. "Are. We. Clear ," she asked. Silence backed up a bit and nodded. "Good," Fluttershy said happily, finally feeling calm after a harrowing day. She went upstairs to her room and changed into her pajamas.

Mean Fluttershy sure does frighten me sometimes. :applecry:

Then set Silence on fire.

:pinkiegasp:

https://m.

Fluttershy stood still in shock, unblinking. Physically, mentally, and emotionally exhausted, she passed out on the porch. Harry gasped, then picked her up. He opened the sliding-glass door and closed it behind him. He walked up to Fluttershy's room, then gently placed her on her bed. He stood next to her bed, keeping a watchful eye on her.

Poor Fluttershy. :pinkiesad2:
At least Harry is keeping her company.

Several miles away, Silence's ashes began to swirl, forming a miniature cyclone. They slowly coalesced into a cloaked being, its question mark emblazoned mask shining in the moonlight. The masked figure sighed, then cracked their knuckles and neck. They tapped their mask. "Mission accomplished. Returning to base."

Oh no! :twilightoops:

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #23 · Dec 2nd, 2022 · · · Ashes to Ashes ·
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All I got to say about this chapter is that it was... weird. :applejackconfused:

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