This story is a sequel to Equestria Girls: It's Showtime--Wallace and Gromit: Cracking Contraptions
Cheese and crackers, Gromit! It's a brand new cracking adventure!
These days in Canterlot City, its newest residents consisting of Wallace and Gromit have been doing whatever they can around town. Yep, Wallace and Gromit's Street Shiners business has been up and running with a good success rate.
However, an old adversary from their past has reappeared into their lives, and not only threatens them, but their new friends.
Chapters (7)
Haven't read it, but just giving massive props for using those legends.
Ah. Feathers McGraw. This should be interesting.
Yeah. I definitely liked the previous series, so I was looking forward to this story quite eagerly. Again, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are wonderfully done, as well as the nods to so many of the previous Wallace and Gromit adventures. Definitely looking forward to seeing how the girls and Spike do against Feathers McGraw.
I wonder if Fluttershy will attempt to use The Stare on Feathers... only for it to fail?
Great job on this latest chapter. Definitely liked the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Appreciated Wallace and Gromit getting the idea to help the animal shelter as well as Rarity's description of how she got that diamond. Also liked the bit with Shaun, Spike and Angel playing cards. Yeah, Feathers is definitely up to something to get that diamond (and possibly steal the charity money too; I don't know about that, but wouldn't discount the possibility). And, yeah, Angel is suspicious of Feathers (understandably), but is confused why (though he'll figure it out pretty soon).
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
Huh. Feathers acts like he never seen an average EG design before. Sparkly eyes all around. : p
Again, you did an excellent job on the dialogue, exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Appreciated the effort Feathers is making in being cautious here in addition to how he got Fluttershy's attention in the first place. And, yeah, Angel is getting suspicious of Feathers but already got in trouble, and so is looking for help. And that was a good nod about Gromit still having Feathers' wanted poster.
VERY much looking forward to more of this.
Got those darker silent and suspenseful moments of the series down. I can imagine some sinister incidental BGM here.
Another excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely appreciated Spike's reflection on how his night was going before Angel came by asking for his help, as well as how Spike caught on well enough to what Angel was saying to be of help. Also liked Angel and Spike's investigation uncovering Feathers' attempt to trap both Fluttershy and Rarity as well as figuring out how Feathers used knockout drops (for all intents and purposes) on so many of the other animals. And, yeah, Spike and Angel getting more info from Wallace and Gromit was also great.
VERY much looking forward to more of this.
Yeah still trying to figure the general layout of that penguin's plan.
I detect a chase with vaudevillian piano music in the future.
Yikes! Really good mix of dialogue, characterizations, action and climax set-up in all the right places. Yeah, I appreciated Rarity's reflection on the night sky before she and Fluttershy got robbed by Feathers. Of course, Rarity could have just used her gem construct power, which she has had since "Legend of Everfree" onward, to create a shield to deflect the bullets from Feathers's gun (i.e. something Green Lanterns and others with similar abilities have done how many dozens of times), but that would have just made Feathers think of something else and give him more information to work with later. But, yeah, really emotional scene with the girls being taken along with the diamonds. REALLY looking forward to seeing Feathers get his in a major way.
But, anyway, really looking forward to the finale.
I assume the finale's running late due to real life getting in the way? That's understandable (I know the feeling), but a quick update would be nice!
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Read my blog on the matter; it explains enough
Well done! Glad you finally got around to finishing the story! Looking forward to whatever you come up with next!
Great conclusion. Even before the link, I could imagine some of the BGM coming in.
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BGM. I am unfamiliar with that acronym. What does it mean?
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background music. not just the main theme but various tracks from the series in general.
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Ah, thanks
Really good job on the exchanges, characterizations, action and general wrap-up/epilogue set-up in all the right places. Certainly appreciated the shows of concern for Fluttershy while chasing Feathers, as well as the animals' interactions, Rarity using her gem construct power to block most of the bullets in Feathers's stolen gun, Angel subduing Feathers and that scene with Rarity and Fluttershy immediately after the rescue. Also really liked the observations concerning Wallace's driving and the heroes' resourcefulness during the pursuit as well as Rarity donating an extremely valuable diamond to Fluttershy after the rescue and Spike acknowledging that Twilight has made a point to study certain guns (and, yeah, her big brother being a cop probably has a lot to do with it).
Well, on to the epilogue.
Hey there. Not much I can say beyond wonderful job on this epilogue. Definitely appreciated the dialogue and characterizations. Glad Fluttershy was able to use the money gained from selling that donated diamond to save the animal shelter as well as the girls' reflections as they were getting ready to graduate from Canterlot High. Also liked that scene with Wallace, Gromit and Shaun at the end too. This took a while, but the ending was more than worth it.