Imagine a freight train roaring down the tracks. Everything's going fine. And then the tracks further along are torn apart like a child's plaything. That is what you just did to my assumption of the direction of this story.
Worst mental pileup I've ever had.
I am very curious as to where the hell this is going.

I'm very tempted to report this for incorrect tags.
Gore, Dark and Tragedy would be useful.
I very much dislike this new development.
Even if this sort of a nightmare scene it is in the story and tags must reflect all of the content.
I'll wait to see what's coming but meh.

Very interesting, I like the massive plot twist with Chrysalis, and the clop was damn good too.

The impregnation is kinky as hell, or I am just weird as fuck, who knows.

what

why

what in the fuck

Wat. :I

why would you do that
...
At least add gore tag?

Wow. I just did not see that coming, and I must say I love it. Very well done.

Wait wut?
... I still came...

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These, ever so much. Seriously? I actually felt that when Chrysalis... when she... oh goddesses, why? WHY?

I went from clopping , to screaming bloody WTF , then to uncontrolled laughing , then back to clopping.

This is fucking genius.

Just... no. All of my no.

Ahaha, literally I thought to myself "...I'm not stopping".

1850426
Yeah, I'm in the same boat here. This story was upvoted, but not after this chapter. That was one hell of a shift in tone and story, and it is not appreciated.

Okay, this thing needs to be tagged properly. Not bad at all, even though it was a tad too gory for me.
Honestly now, tag it properly before someone who didn't find that funny really reports you (though I don't know what the immediate result would be.)

First time I've ever unfavourited/downvoted a story after an update. I hope you're proud of yourself

This will take some serious explaining.

Is this real life?

Interesting turn of events.

it went from cool
to iiinteresting
to awe yeah
to bwa wha hun?
to why why why
to dear gd why
to nope nope nope nope

*Looks around guiltily*
Is it bad that I laughed at this?
Like... I don't like what happened, but it was so unexpected that it caught me off guard and threw me into a fit.
Honestly, though, I liked it until the Chrysalis part. I hope the next part explains what the fuck just happened better than that movie "We Need to Talk About Kevin"... which is a fucked up movie, by the by.
I'll be waiting...?

These are the sounds I just made.

I am surprised and shocked and I'm totally tracking this

I'm not sure if I want to continue reading this or if I want ti kill it with fire cause it's so damn weird....

Good job on the story, though.

First chapter is great.
Second chapter sucks.

This really needs a dark tag.

2808250 Well that's a giant no brainer.

It takes a lot to make me even the slightest bit uncomfortable. Of course being a man one thing will always do it: cutting off a guys dick. You took that to the next level. I need major loli to recover from this. Now, does anyone know where I can find a Glimmer Shield, Twilight Sparkle, Princess Cadence three-way? (I'm totally not one)

This came out of left field. For the love of all things holy tell me this is a nightmare borne from Dusk Shine / Twilight surviving her encounter with Changelings. This makes very little to no sense, and all together kinda sucks. If it isn't a nightmare, than you really need to have them saved. Otherwise it sucks as a R63, GenderBender incesty love fic.

Also are you ever going to update this fic?

So I'm assuming this story is dead

W-was I just trolled? Brilliant!

1850328
I agree wholeheartedly. What a magnificent trainwreck. I can't help but wonder where it's going, but I don't want to...

so when will this be updated?

...
Magnificent.
No, really.
Well, let me put it this way: you wrote a sexy clopfic...that turned into a castration horror fic.
A WINNER IS YOU!

Morbid curiosity compels me onward.