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I take it no one told them that it was okay to have sex while pregnant?

oh, that is just EVIL !! .. poor shining ..

I... I can't even... what? :twilightoops: I read the summary, but didn't piece together it would be like THAT, until after the supposed sex scene. :facehoof: Sorry, but even though I like Shining Armor and Cadence as a couple and reading stories with them, gonna have to downvote this, cause Cadence is kind of a bitch here, for being a so-called Princess/Goddess of love. :fluttershyouch:

I personally think this story warrants a gore tag, if only for the implications/writing of said scene, even if it would turn people off, with the characters listed. :applecry: But it's your call...

Edit: Okay, so against better judgment, I looked up castration pics on an MLP pic-centric site and probably see that you got the idea from one with Shining Armor and Cadence. Still... it doesn't make this any less disturbing, like some gore fics I have read in all my time reading MLP ones (I hardly read ones in other fandoms/types of stories, as I recall). *shudders*

Is it sad to say that I've seen better castration stories on the internet?

wow... that was...

Clicked on the picture link; sent me to Funnyjunk, therefore no picture.

Just stick it in her pooper

Problem solved

1909329 I can't view the image. I want to view the image!

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Whyyyyyyy D:

I feel properly trolled. :B

What a lovely story with such a happy ending. I like to see practical and compassionate solutions to intractable problems. Cadence is a princess, she should make this mandatory with a 'One Foal, Two Snips' rule. Really made my day.

Males are always fixer-upper deals, after all. :trollestia:

Story was going good til you turned her into a sadist. Add a gore tag as well and down vote from me.

The only thing missing was her cooking up his spherical sperm silos and serving them to him for breakfast in the morning.

Overall, I thought it was a good story.

I'm hurting for him :flujavascript:void(0);ttercry::raritydespair::raritycry:

I know what picture this is based on in this story. Why you would ever do a story like that, I have no idea. I could go on about how OOC Cadence is and how disturbing and sick this is, but I'm not going to. All I can say is, this story is just disgusting and shouldn't have been made at all.

can you PM me a link to the pic please?

Comment posted by shadowblitz13 deleted Dec 8th, 2013
Comment posted by shadowblitz13 deleted Dec 8th, 2013

This shit is neither touching nor heartfelt, as for "unconventional", I can think of a few other words that describe this more accurately. "Painful", "disturbing", and "revolting" all come to mind quite readily.

Seriously, throw the Dark tag up there. Give us SOME warning!

Well I liked it. >.>

OK so apparently someone has a terribly fucked up moral compass i mean really what was with that scene, even if this story was meant to be a troll to the readers it still fell flat completely. The fact that cadence being the supposed alicorn of love would objectify her husband in such a manner is just ridiculous this makes her out to be an emotionally unstable sociopath.

last time i checked love was supposed to be an equilibrium two lovers equal to one another, this story insinuates cadence thinks of shining the same way a man thinks of his Labrador and yes i understand shining cheated on cadence and that is a terrible thing that is fixed with therapy or perhaps moving on not cutting the others nut sack out and mental domination you utter psychopath!

Other than that though good job on the chapter well worded and i couldn't spot any grammatical errors seemed to have a good structure as well

1910654
Pardon me, but fuck you.

Though, aside from... v that, this story certainly does something:

It explains Equestria's population issues. Though, why a species would be idiotic enough to literally castrate itself into extinction is beyond me...

3957564

Pardon me, but fuck you.

No no, noble sir, fuck you! I insist! Sadly, though, I have no fucks to give you. Please accept my apologies. But if any fucks should become available, it is my wish that you should be generously granted them, and in so doing, be utterly and completely fucked!

Oh, wait, I see that by the depth of your comments, and the cut of your jib, you already are! Completely and utterly indeed! Very good sir! I am so happy to see it so!

And now, our business concluded, we should each be off. I, off fuckless, and you, simply to fuck off. So fuck off in peace, good and noble sir, and may you forever remain fucked in body, as you clearly are in spirit!

That... and two snips. For your health. And that of the human genome.

I just...found that picture
:pinkiegasp: :pinkiegasp: :applejackconfused:

This is the most disgusting piece of crap I've ever had the misfortune to burn my eyes with. :pinkiesick:

1910654

You are a very sick women...:unsuresweetie:

3957905 gotta admit that was an amazing comback

4065640

I thank you, good sir, for your kind words about my unkind words.

was the surgery consensual?

edit: So, non-con. Dunno if I care. Surprise.

1911719 -reads summery- I shouldn't read this -reads comments- I really shouln't read this -sees Bronystories- fuck...I have to read this now...:facehoof:

Aside from destroying Shining's character with the removal of his filly makers, this wasn't as bad as everyone was making it seem. Y'all made it sound like she did it cupcakes style :pinkiecrazy:

:twilightoops:

Okay, Shining was unfaithful, we get that, but castration? Augh. AUUUUUUUUGH.

Augh augh augh augh augh.

:facehoof:

Not cool.

Ya, I'm pretty sure the smart Cadence will never want more than just one foal, given how heat works for horses :trollestia:
It would be a lot simpler to fellate him every how and then, or just use magic. Then again, one cannot argue a fetish fic, no matter the logical absurdity of the situation :pinkiehappy:

I should have expected this from the title.

I think the phrase "offed painlessly" fits better XD

Nice try, Rabbi Dashielstein, you can't use your Jew magic to make me read this again!

1910654 Got some Poe's Law going on in here. Chat, this is satire, right?

You sick bastard! :pinkiecrazy:

very well written however I think you might be a little misinformed because castration does not remove all male sexual desire or ability when it's done to an adult that's only an effect of doing it to someone who has not sexually matured it just greatly reduces the libido of an adult like Shining Armor; still, I imagine Shining Armor would be pretty mad At Cadence after he finds out what she did combined how testicles play the essential part of stimulating the clitoris by slapping it during sex so Shining despite still getting erections would no longer be able to please Cadence I imagine it would no doubt inevitably lead to their divorce.

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