I did not want any of this. If I just had distrusted that dictator 2 scenario I would have not been forced into this shit. Now decisions are vital to me, even if i'm not very good at it.
Still, at least I can always try again when I blow it up.
But it doesn't change the fact that other nations will simply not listen to me. Because they cannot understand what I must go through. Because they don't see beyond the title I was given.
Until now.
I am Alexander. And please, before you start hating me for what I am, I beg you to listen to my side of the story.
Still in consideration to vaguely include some displacedverse elements.
Proofreader: Time Reaper
Chapters (5)
As Bison once said. YES...YES...YES!!!!!!!!!
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Why?
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I think this is a story worth praising. It is an inventive story with an untested idea that works well. Sure it could use a bit of polish but what couldn't. All in all i want to see more of this story soon.
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Thank you. I hope to deliver more chapters soon, and to be honest, part of the idea came from playing dictator 2. Not good nor bad, but I felt that I could make a story out of it.
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I'm glad. I hope you have a good day and to see more soon.
You use single quotes to show talking, when it should be double, as in “ instead of ‘. Otherwise, I see no problems and am interested on the path this will take.
9122676
I will make sure to fix that.
Nice to see this story up. Now it will be with the other stories of human dictators, personally I hope it is of the same region as the dictator from my story but I won't complain if he isn't. Now, what does " I will decide which story will get priority depending on what you think." means?
If it is what I think it does then I personally support this.
Also, since you made this video game linked, I'll pass you this one to see what you think of it (please say it on the comments).
Best wishes.
EDIT: Would you mind if I promote/add this in other group's folders?
*burp*
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I don't mind. The more the better. Also, I have other stories which i'm writing, so I will try to give priority to the story that people likes the most.
I find this story idea to be very interesting!
At least he took celestia with him to help. Xd
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I didn't understand what did you mean there.
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Stupid grammar fixer, it wont let me curse.
It's supposed to say Hell. Basically he took her with him to death.
When more awesome chapter?
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Ah, ok. Next chapter probably in some days.
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Whoo!
Mmm, I'm very interested to see where this goes. Xd
Excellent.
This was a nice introduction although I couldn't stop feeling the usual info dump. Whatever, this was a nice read.
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Don't worry about the big amount of info, it is only for that chapter.
More plz :3
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I finally fixed that. Thanks for the help!
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Your welcome, always glad to help out a fellow creator.
What's Dictator 2?
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Check it on google play or appstore (if it was released there).
I'm definitely interested in seeing where this story goes. Xd
I've never played the game, who's the opposition?
Can't wait for the next AWESOME chapter!!!
I know this was based off of a mobile game, but it also reminds me of another one called Lapes. Check it out its a good game.
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I know about lapse. Maybe I can add some elements from it.
Any news of a update soon
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I hope to finish the next chapter this week. I try to take my time to ensure that It has the least number of errors.
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Yes!
Next chapter is getting delayed due to the importance I consider it has, and I'm stuck trying to find a way around. So don't worry, the story is still up, I already know how I want it to progress.
The f**k?
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?
When next awesome chapter?
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Hopefully soon. this chapter is the most challenging one by far.
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Awesome!
I still have hope for this story
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It's not dead. Just having trouble conveying ideas.
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That's why i still have hope, some people think its dead. But i don't think its dead, your just trying to figure out what comes next so it doesn't become cringy and bad, and that's why i will stand by this story till the end no matter what.
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Thanks for your support!
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Your welcome dude, or chick, or helicopter.
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Dude should be the term.
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I say helicopter because a guy got mad at me for calling him dude, so i called him a helicopter.
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Lol
Well it's awesome seeing this again dude!
Can't wait for more AWESOME chapters.
Hehe. Hope it was worth the long wait.
You welcome dude. Best wishes.
I loved it. Cant wait for more.
Great work. Cant wait to see more.
Any chance this is still being worked on?
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Not dead. I'm only lacking time to work on it.