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Black Hailstorm


A never-ending storm of ideas

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This story is a sequel to Rated M For Mistaken


An alternate ending to Rated M For Mistaken


I did not ask for this. This type of punishment. I did not want to come here, to frighten this alien race that a majority of us humans would consider nothing more than animals of which had their own intelligence that came no where near to true sentience. Yet here I am, in Equestria. About to be judged for something that had merely been received out of hand.

Princess Celestia and Princess Luna have come to a decision. Stickler will receive justice, and thus so will the ponies. Now all that matters to Stickler is whether Justice will truly be received.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 12 )

OH SHIT A SEQUEL. Must. Commense. Read. Now.

6911380
Looking forward to your thoughts

Wait wait wait wait wait you can not just leave me with that!:applecry: What happens now?
*Checks story status* what do you mean complete? I can't be left hanging like this. You sly dog you,:duck: baiting me with this awesome alternate ending just to leave me at another cliffhanger.

Alright all that Above nonsense aside, loved it. You gave us a nice expansion on the minimal information given. We got to see the "Trial" we were shown more of the damage caused and why the Ponies reacted the way they did.
All around just needs some minor errors fixes. I liked it :pinkiehappy:

6911483
Excellent. Glad I was able to do something about the bits I had left off in the previous story. I may in the future continue this story, but could probably use a reminder in the distant future. Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

SRY
SRY #5 · Feb 7th, 2016 · · ·

Moar:flutterrage:

I wonder if they could have used an illusion of him being turned into a pony?

WHERE IS THE SEQUEL:raritydespair:

6911475 I kinda want to write a sequel to this, if you'll let me, and call it Rated E for Extraction.

7505418 Interesting, by all means go ahead, just be sure to leave this in the link when you finish. Heck, I might even continue this later on in the near future.

Let me know how it turns out.

7796424 Perhaps. I've been thinking about it, and I may have a sequel to this.

Your government would have-

No, it would not.

Haha haha..... Bitch...... If humanity saw this shit you'd all get bombed, fuck delegation its obvious your entire kingdom is primitive so naturally we'll just treat you as hostiles. And you're all f*cked.

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