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TheOneAJ


I'm am an autistic brony, looking to write fantasy and everyday life novels for my kind. I became a brony when I related well with applejack and twlight, and I love the show.

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On a hot summers day, after months of close friendship, will these two girls finally find love in each other?

Because we badly need more WallflowerMontage on fim fiction! And as much as I love Blooming by Bookhorse, who helped with pre-reading and maybe with a bit of editing when she gets back from bronycon, ^^’, I want a story where these two kids now! And hey, this is fim fiction, if there’s a story you want but you can’t find it, create it!

Cover art by Gabbslines

And yes! Exspect a minor polish sometime next week, I just wanted to get this out to focus on my next video review too

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Comments ( 9 )

Cute and very well done ! :pinkiesmile:

Love this story. Aside from my favorite part being Wallflower falling into the pool (though it's not a fetish for me, to be clear), story was cute too.

(spelling correction list removed since they have since been corrected)

"by Bookhorse"

is there one of them that have AS ?

I would've liked to see a flashback of how Wallflower and Juniper first met, but besides that, this was pretty good.

We really do need more Montageblush in fimfiction.

Keep up the good work. :)

Not wanting to be upstaged, Juniper instead answered; “Well, I was going to say not have to spend hours watering over-watered plants on a hot summer day, but,” she booped Wallflowers noise.

I believe that should be "Wallflower's nose" at the end there.

Apart from that this is wonderfully cute.

Juniper rolled her eyes. “But seriously, we almost done? There is such a thing as too much water for plants you know.”

And trying not to be wasteful. :ajbemused:

Juniper put an assuring hand on Wallflowers shoulder. “They will be fine, sweetie. You’re the best gardener in all of Canterlot. ”

I wouldn't call her greatest Gardner as I'm sure there's better ones than her. :duck:

“Come on!” Juniper said, grasping her friends shoulder to lead her in the opposite direction. She at least politely nodded to the young man while glaring at his idiot friends. The boy looked concerned, but figured it was best to let them be and stay out of their business

Period is missing at the end.

Wallflower took hold of her left elbow. “It’s just... im so worthless and pathetic!” She started to cry a little. “I think back to when nobody noticed me and, as bad and nice as that was, I can’t help but think if I could still make myself invisible I wouldn’t have meet and dragged you through the mud.”

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To her surprise and dismay (surprismay?... ) Wallflower turned away. Fortunately for Juniper, she said, “You should probably find someone else. Someone more pretty? I’m sure an emotional broken case like me will just break your style.

" missing at the end.

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