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The Cowardly Christian
For everyone seeking guidance, I recommend looking up Ravi Zacharias, he's gotten me out of some dark times. His FULL sermons are available online for ALL...
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Not bad. Not bad at all
nice
I hope the next ch comes out soon.
Interesting start... curious to see where this will go.
This is pretty good
. It’s been a while since it’s been updated but good so far. Hope you don’t get discouraged by those that down vote your stories. If they haven’t stated “why” they did that than their vote really never mattered.
I might have accidentally hit the down vote and didn’t realize it until recently when I up voted this story. Sorry about that
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Hope you will get back to this. I would really like to see what you have planned for the rest of this story. Thanks again and good luck on you future projects
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thank you!
...it is being worked on as we speak!
Be safe!
Spike and a cute ember? oh this is gonna be good and it BETTER not go unfinished
Keep up the good work
Be careful what you wished for...Ember and the other dragons are gonna regret all the teasing and belittling of a dragon that didn't know how much of a firebomb Spike can be...And remember that he's a dragon who can use magic...
I've had mixed feelings about this story. On one hand, I do enjoy wardrobe malfunctions and the scene where Spike's clothes are burnt off and the later chapters where he loses them were ones I really liked. However, I do feel this is all a bit harsh on Spike, but that has to be done sometimes in stories, so I won't bash the story for that. I do feel like Spike is somewhat fooling himself about Ponyville loving him, since everypony was teasing him about the incidents where he was exposed and that just seems kinda mean, shouldn't Twilight have done something about that? There's also the fact that Spike seems okay with the whole Sex thing. I personally think he would've rejected it and just accepted the pain and possible death that would have resulted from it and he would tell this to Celestia's face, she would probably be reluctant to force him to attend the Gauntlet knowing what happens during it. Finally, the crossover part seems a bit out of place since it isn't the main focus. Sorry if I upset you, I just felt like sharing my feelings. This story did inspire some ideas for me, so that's wonderful!
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No problem, constructive criticism is welcomed even encouraged.
Well, first of all..who said Twilight didn't do anything about it? I just haven't gotten to her POV yet...but spoiler, she was LIVID.
...I'm trying to portray Spike as a late bloomer, hormonal teenager...He's more sexually attracted to his own kind, then he ever was to any pony...also, bare in mind that dragon pheromone/hormones are going to be portrayed as so much stronger then normal hormones and pheromones...still..perhaps I could've done a better job portraying that...maybe in later chapters show a younger Spike being interested in Sex but this conflicted with a far more prude pony society and his prude pony mother Twilight?
As for the crossover...keep in mind I really haven't gotten into the main story yet...the crossover bits will become more prevalent as time goes by...also, we need more Jackie chan adventure fanfics...
Thanks for the input.
Is this story dead?
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Sorry, times are tough...I'm mostly focusing on commissions these days...
I'll continue this if someone PAYS me...