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The Cowardly Christian


For everyone seeking guidance, I recommend looking up Ravi Zacharias, he's gotten me out of some dark times. His FULL sermons are available online for ALL...

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After a great calamity, many worlds are merged. This is a time for heros!..but also villains. One boy must cast off the shackles of normality, build his TRUE family, become a man, save the world. But above all...he must SECURE. CONTAIN. PROTECT.
MASSIVE CROSSOVER! Wendy/Dipper, Dipper clone/Pacifica, dipper pony clone/Twilight Sparkle Ronnie/Lincoln/Six.

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 24 )

You really need to post this on groups

Ok I see it

And the rewrites for the chapters are more your style now

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And for the record also thank you...for everything else...despite the issues, I think you've helped make this a pretty great story.

Stop using the same I’m publishing a book message as it’s way out of date.

Let’s see if you can’t make Slenderman into something other than a complete waste of time. As in a villain so powerful and able to do whatever they want and appearing and killing whenever they want where having any other villain is pointless and that for anyone to do anything with them. People need to have sitcom mindsets where like in Family Guy, Peter can destroy and murder all he wants and next week people will still treat him like a good man.

Slenderman isn’t a you love to hate him villain. He’s the broken level in a videogame or a bug that makes it impossible to play the game like you can’t save in the same save slot and you only get one save slot. Making playing the game a complete waste of time. That’s what Slenderman you made him in the last fic.

Don’t be a disappointment.

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I mean getting one save slot and you can’t overwrite on the save slot and can only delete the save game by exiting the game and deleting the saved game in the main menu. Losing all of your progress you done in the game. And there is no auto save.

I don't know if you're interested in. But I need help with creating my own Fusion Fall.

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Oh? Well...I'm about to go to work...

But when I get back, sure. I'd love to help you with that...

Tell you what?

Write down a list of whatever issues your having and I'll try to help you work through them the best I can when I get back...

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Mainly the Characters and where they're from is all I need as I'm not familiar with most of the characters.

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Okay, that's fine.

...let's start with the basics:

What are your favorite characters(Movie, cartoon, videogame, comic, anime, manga, etc.):

What are your favorite worlds to explore/have adventures on(Movie, cartoon, videogame, comic, anime, manga, etc.):

(keep in mind the two lists here need not be related, they can be completely different, you could HATE the characters of a world, but LOVE the world their on. And vice versa. So don't be afraid to mix and match, you might surprise yourself and love the combo)

Feel free to ask any questions if you need clarification on something...

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Hot damn! Although, I do agree with you that the Cowardly Christian has a heavy dark obsession with Slenderman being a total monster/powerhouse jerk that screws everybody/anybody if he wants to.

And this ain't the first time he keeps re-using Slenderman in his stories, because I did read them too.


But, I never thought I'd seen you criticize a entirely different author that does something to purposely make something so OP and unstoppable, that nobody else can beat them? :trixieshiftright: :unsuresweetie:

As in a villain so powerful and able to do whatever they want and appearing and killing whenever they want where having any other villain is pointless and that for anyone to do anything with them.

No offense, but isn't this exactly what Sunset or the entire pony race from either Sunset in Japan, Futa Multiversal Madness, and sometimes with regular Sunset in Female Futa World, or even The Boys crossover in a similar problem?

And your other stories that I didn't listed here probably has a similar problems with Sunset too.

The problem; That they can do whatever they want, beating, criticizing, or killing whatever they want without negative consequences or bad karma going to their asses!?

Except that the real irony is you're not labeling them as "villains", like when you're critique the "'Villain' Slenderman being too OP to be beaten" issue.


( Although, the last two stories I mentioned are all right and okay to me, despite some "decisions" regarding Sunset might make me be bothered with or disagree.

Like what MPony1 talking about Poor Rarity and those Diamond Dogs. But, The Boys Sunset/Alicorn didn't do anything wrong personally. It's just she also has that similar problem to "do anything she wants without negative consequences, and being a OP powerhouse to boot".

It's the first two stories is where I have a total problem with it. Specifically Sunset in Japan, and that Futa Ponies screwing with the Multiverse shenanigans. )


Now, I'm not trying to sound rude, or accuse you as a bit of a hypocrite. But seeing what you said to the Cowardly Christian back in May 2021. And NOW recently reading your own stories and now connecting the dots?

You could see where I'm coming from after reading this, right?

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Yes! Thank you!

Everytime I had him do something a little too 'OP' he would whine and complain and berate me!

Yet when he made Dr Membraine, the Doctor or Scrooge McDuck too OP just because 'they can do anything because their 'scrooge Mcduck'...somehow that's okay?

I mean isn't that the sort of BS power that SHOULD have been lost when they left their world? By his OWN rules?

Anyone else smell a double standered here?

I mean I even COMPROMISED with him and made it so Slenderman was weaker then HIS OC golden boy 'Madhat' so that they could balance each other in a game of 'cat and mouse'...

I even offered to PAY him EXTRA for any parts of the story he was uncomfortable with or required extending!

He agreed to that and yet...he NEVER did it!

He NEVER sent the hats on his own initiative! Never to keep him in check! Everytime I used Slenderman to move the plot forward he wouldn't send the hats he just whined and complained- despite the fact I was only doing it because he REFUSED to put in my favorite characters, scenes, etc(WHICH IS WHAT I WAS PAYING HIM FOR) because they were too 'illogical' or didn't 'match the setting'(for crying out loud I WAS PAYING FOR IT, why should he be allowed to pick the setting? Or decide 'nope the setting of YOUR story that YOUR paying for won't allow it'...I mean...what?! Just...what!? Seriously, am I missing something here?).

He ONLY brought in the hats when I allowed him to take Slenderman 'somewhat' out of the story...and let me tell you something, he took that 'inch' and stretched it for a mile and tried to RUIN ALL my plans just because he didn't like them!

I TOLD him about my plans in the beginning and he AGREED with them! Not to mention that was the story I PAID you to do...seriously, What the heck man!?

Okay, granted I didn't go into too much detail about it, but only because HE TOLD ME NOT TO!

Yeah, he actually told me to not overwhelm him with details until LATER chapters! Yet, he LATER gets angry at ME for not sharing those same details he TOLD me not to tell him until later!?

Seriously, what the heck?!

(deep breath)

Sorry for ranting...

Madhat886 used to be a hero of mine...my favorite author...and then he ends it all with a DEATH THREAT...

I guess what they say is true...NEVER meet your hero's...

Anyway, thank you for the review and for your kind words of support. The lord bless you this fine day...

Comment posted by OP Omni God-Emperor Doom deleted Oct 17th, 2023

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Um, damn! :twilightoops:

I didn't really thought it was this bad between you too!!?? Thought you were fellow pals or something?


All I have wanted is for Madhatt to realize that he is a bit of a hypocrite when he criticized about your Slenderman, WHEN he does the same exact thing with Sunset, or the entire pony race in his own stories as being freaking unstoppable OP monsters, doing whatever the hell they want to everybody/anybody else, without negative consequences or bad karma for doing that!?

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Again, I Apologize for exploding at you...I guess despite everything, it's still a sensitive topic for me...

For what it's worth, I agree with you.

Can we get a translation on the Zalgo text speech please? Could not read a thing about it with all of the stuff in it.

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I thought you were all able to translate that already? Everytime I did it before, someone always commented about what it said...so I just assumed...

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I decided you were right, I'm updating ti with a translation in the footnotes, enjoy!

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