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It's been a long time since Rainbow was brought back to Equestria, and some things have not gotten better over the course of a year...

A repost from fanfiction.net, with the authors permission.

I've more or less become the official reposter of DeadLight63's works.

Original Link http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8135475/1/My_Little_Dashie_Unbreakable_Bonds

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 57 )

Heavy will read this later.

Was unsure at first, chapter 2 is MUCH more solid than chapter 1.

Reading the rest now :pinkiehappy:

:fluttercry: So wonderful........

So many manly tears... :raritydespair::raritycry:

I don't understand why people disliked this. It seems like a legit sequel to me. Btw, I love how the main character's name is Daniel. That's my name :pinkiehappy:

970848 Mine to. Not that I wrote this :D

That FNG needs to get fired.

Great story by the way

So sad, joyful at some points, and no matter what mood this is in, it makes me cry of joy or sadness. Good job. :pinkiesad2::fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair::applecry::fluttershysad:

So sad, joyful at some points, and no matter what mood this is in, it makes me cry of joy or sadness. Good job. :pinkiesad2::fluttercry::raritycry::raritydespair::applecry::fluttershysad:

970848

i think they dislike it cuz it is sad :fluttershbad:
i canot handel reading this it makes me cry :fluttercry: :applecry:

Oh god, the feels, they are strong with this one. :fluttercry::raritycry:

The emptiness in my soul has been filled! Thank you for posting this... Now to go dry the keyboard...

And I shed even more tears for My Little Dashie :fluttercry: praise be to whoever wrote this!:pinkiesad2:

I, I honestly can't describe how shocked I am. I don't get it, I honestly don't understand how this is suposed to be a good sequal.

I went into this thinking about one of the great, possibly and in my opinion the greatest and most recognized fan fic in history. I loved My Little Dashy and am not ashamed to say i cry every time i read it. So naturally i had impossible hopes for this sequal. Any small thing i was going to latch onto and nitpick because the original ended so strongly. Nopony could wright a sequal to match that ending, not even the original wrighter. It's impossible. So realizing this i decided to give this story some leway.

Then i noticed all the spelling mistakes, knowing my own spelling i forgave them all instantly, but was ticked that they were here. Then they told part of the story for Rainbows perspective, which never happened in My Little Dashy excluding the note, and I'm sorry but thats just not how the story should be told. The original was so strong because of the way it was told to us, through wrightings, not as they happened. It aloud more emotion and thought to be put into them. This...so i forgave that and found the next problem

The original auther NEVER made any referance to anything show related, besides the number of seasones, that there where 8 and the sonic rainboom. To say what seasone 7's pilot was going to be...bugged me. But i forgave that and found the next problem. They said his name, i'm sorry but i drew the line there. Anything after that would just be to much, the beauty of this character was his facelessness, he could be anyone, The name givin in truth describes little but i just feel this great shattering of the atmosphere of the first story.

Then there was another problem, which not only broke the line i had drawn, but caused me to right this incredable waist of your time. They had to build a portal out of transisters and wires and Celestia nows what else to get here? WHY? HOW in EQUESTRIA did they get THAT tecnology? Why don't we see it anywhere else? We've seen the hospital as a modern hospital, and the flim flam brothers ssss6k, but that stuff runs on magic, not electricity, how the hay is THIS here? And that cop out ending where everything is returned, albeit the best part of the story left me feeling horrible, because it's such a let down from the previouse ending.

I just don't know what to say. I understand why you guys like this but, the original was so much better/ How could anypony think when they went into this that they could give a proper sequal i don't know but aparently they did it because you all seem to like it. Maby i'm missing something or maybe I'm just upset becasuse the original was in all honesty the best peice of art i've ever read but this...this makes me sad, not because it's suposed to, but because it feels so unnessisary.

ON A POSITIVE NOTE: bet you didn't think i'd say that. The ending was nice, on it's own as a randome thousand word story that turned out to be a dream, i'd love it. And i can see the wrighter cared about this, so i'm trying to be as nice as possible, alot of talent is here and could be used to wright great things, just not sequals to things that don't need them

TL;DR I didn't like the story but i respect all who did and probably wouldn't of like it if it was perfect because of my veiws on the original story anyway so i'm glad you all liked this story but i'm giving it thumbs down.

so much feels :raritydespair:

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They got the technology in season 6.:trollestia:

oh. my god. so many feels.

This would be a perfect ending for MLD. Great work!

I liked this sequel almost as much as I liked the original story it was . . .:fluttercry: very touching.

Really good :raritystarry::rainbowwild:

dat ending i cry every time i wish my dad loved me like that...:applecry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritycry::raritydespair:

the ending made me cry! so many manly tears were shed!

:ajsmug::derpytongue2::yay::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::raritywink::raritystarry::twilightsmile::trollestia: i loved the story you are awesome robcaker52 or 3

970850 hi im very shy so :fluttershyouch:: i lov that story my little dashie

Wasn't it a day in equestria was a year in our world. Remember when her friends were surprised that dashie had already become accustomed to calling him "Daddy", that was because to them, she was only gone 15 days. I doubt her friends would go seven and a half years before coming over.
She was with him until she was 15, where did the 17 years old come into it? or was that just a typo meaning to say when she was 7 years old?

Forget the second half of my second question. I wrote that before reading the second chapter

Small Typo on the last paragraph
"I opened the door to my home and said said hello to pictures of my family. "

970848
It isn't a direct sequel, that doesn't mean its not great. However you can tell by the different writing style and a few plot changes.
Most dominant is the time difference. In the original it used to be 1 day in equestria was a year here, but that had to be changed for the concept of the story to make sense

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I will have to agree with you on pretty much all of that. Nobody can create a sequel to the original. and the fact that the timings all changed would have had some effect right ?

Wait...
A MY LITTLE DASHIE SEQUEL?!!!!!
WHY WAS I NEVER INFORMED OF THIS :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:
I will definitely read this! Later, when I'm alone...
I can already tell I'll be bawling.

this is just awesome it feels like a true sequel

awwwwwww I loved this one! it made me so happy

Oh god I don't even want to think about eating cupcakes right now. *shivers*

and of course the sequel IS SO SAD!

i wish Rob would make this an official sequel to My Little Dashie :3 :pinkiesad2:

...1 day = 1 year... wtf?

I agree to the 2nd comment below

What Does FNG Stand For?:rainbowhuh:

SO. MANY. FEELS. :raritycry:

Oh Celestia, the feels! :applecry:
2881663 FNG is slang for Fucking New Guy.

Me: Don't cry! Don't cry! Don't cry- *Start crying uncontrollably:pinkiesad2::rainbowlaugh:

Yes Yes YES! Celestia you're finally growing from your trollestia self

6039670 it's fan fiction. There's some differences from canon.

This is was so heart touching Ahghh the feels!

A story inside of a story? Storyception!

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