Bus Stop

You meet the strangest people at a bus stop. Sometimes that’s just what you need.

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Aburi

Aburi #1 · Mar 3rd, 2015 · 1 · ·

I think this would actually make an excellent segue into a full story. A lot of times the real story isn't the epic battle of good vs evil, but rather putting together the pieces left after the big fight.

Adamanthys

Adamanthys #2 · Mar 3rd, 2015 · · ·

Cool premise, good characterization on both sides and based around my favorite character. Looks like a winner to me.

You have my attention.

silvadel

silvadel #3 · Mar 3rd, 2015 · · ·

Yes -- this could work as the beginning of a story against the elements. Dash did a bad thing there saying, "I can always eat the grass." That is tempting fate.

Snakeskin Ducttape

Snakeskin Ducttape #4 · Mar 3rd, 2015 · · ·

Busstop approves of this story.

Zuabug

Zuabug #5 · Mar 3rd, 2015 · 2 · ·

I like this little thing. Gotta agree with Aburi, it would make an excellent start to something larger if you felt the inspiration and motivation for it.

Great work :3 Keep it up!

Jazzaman

Jazzaman #6 · Feb 13th, 2016 · · ·

well i cant say for certain that i completely got the gist of what was going on in this fic. But I enjoyed it so good job I guess? I don't know it felt like eating a cheese ball. It tasted good but it didn't last long and there wasn't much in it.

PaulAsaran