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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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Comment posted by wiccanminnesota deleted Mar 24th, 2018

8813954 Wishing to not get a mare pregnant: Totally doable. Wishing for sex? More... questionable, especially dependent on how much the mare in question wants to bone him in the first place.

As for the more minor stuff, and this goes for most of these, good/questionable for once he realizes he has this power. Right now he is slightly oblivious.

Comment posted by wiccanminnesota deleted Mar 24th, 2018

8813974 Oh, first, I am harem trash so him getting with the CMC, especially Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle, is ALL too likely, though I thought I would wait to see the direction of it before adding the romance tag.

As for... all of this honestly: Gamer's Journal went through a similar period where there was a lot of me talking in the comments while people found out just what the boundaries were and such like that. So please, don't apologize, especially for absolutely reasonable requests like fucking the CMC. This is just how things like this go because I don't want to leave you all in the dark, but I also don't want to allow UNLIMITED POWER! so everything is allowed.

Comment posted by wiccanminnesota deleted Mar 24th, 2018

Here's a wish that Tender Taps can have granted: Have Apple Bloom give him a nude lap dance... and he's allowed to touch her

8814127 This is kind of similar to the problem of getting a girl to fuck him isn't something this power can do unless the girl is already interested in fucking him. Then again, as he has three, there are ways to get... creative with this.

Hmm, Let us see how far we can push this. said he has three minor wish, hmm.

"I wish that I could give great messages, particularly to fillies and mares."
"I wish Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo would have lower inhibition towards me.
"I wish Apple bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo, would stay over messages, at my place.

Lets test the water shall we?

8814210 'Small' wishes. Wish 1) would make him able to give a half decent message, 2) slight, not major, and 3) that's mostly fine for a small wish unless there are major issues with getting them there for any reason.

So these are pretty good, I just wanted to clarify because this is a new game, and I want to make sure that people can understand the rules. :twilightblush:

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Thanks, always enjoy these little "push your limit" games. figured I was pushing a bit.

8814234 You did hit it pretty well though, and admittedly I have to figure out where I cross the lines myself just so that I don't limit you all too much.

Can he wish something bit stronger in exchange for all 3 wish for a day?

8814251 I was hoping someone might ask that. *begins laughing maniacally* He won't do it next chapter, but it's totally an option, though still be careful with the limitations.

So he has 2 more wish for the day?

Wishing for Applebloom not teling anybody in the dance studio about the incident.

8814266 While fair, honestly, Apple Bloom would need to be more worried about people thinking she was trying to seduce Tender Taps as he is Ponyville's number one dancer, and seen as a complete fairy by all of Ponyville. Or, was before what Apple Bloom saw. :rainbowwild:

Okay so I'm big on transformation stuff. Mostly genderbend, but that doesn't seem like a likely outcome for this. At the very least I know Tender looks feminine, but wouldn't want him switching genders.

One interesting thing I think would be neat is if he tries to add Cheerilee to his 'harem' if it does so happen to go that route.

I'm assuming a wish to make her his age is just too much for the wishes to handle, but what if he used a wish for her to "Be closer to his own age" How many years might that shave off of her? If he gets three wishes, he could technically keep using one each day for this, getting her closer, or maybe use all three in one day to speed up the process? If he can eventually get her down to his age, he could start wishing for her to be more comfortable being a teen girl assuming she has problems with that, or maybe even that she could have thoughts of being one of his girls?

Or should this just be one thing we should stay away from? ^^;

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Fair enough
How about healing his arm?

8814279 It may be something you should keep in mind for... someday, but yeah, transformation is the number 1 thing that it can't do, because those changes are too permanent and the like such as that. Permanent effects are the other big no, as almost anything permanent can then be stacked, so even if it's a small effect at first, it will go far beyond that pretty easily.

8814283 It's a minor bruise, so yes actually!

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But wouldn't by your own rules and logic, mean 'healing' his arm would be a 'permanent effect' and thus a no no? :P

so effects need to be temporary, can't physically change anyone and can only effect his immediate vicinity, am i getting the rules right? so if impreg is off the table....

maybe lactation? is that possible?

8814340 Temporary lactation would be possible I will say, such as filling their tits with milk, but not having them actually be naturally producing it themselves.

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Temporary increases to regeneration, or small healing of minor effects, I cant see being to much, slight and hard to notice changes. may also be possible, its how your word it or how it effects. It seems the wishes follow the art of 'touches' it touches you lightly like a Mosquito, you won't notice at first, but eventually it'll get to the point you will. Some changes may be more notable but entirely ineffectual. From what I've seen thus far, this seem to be the rule. Slow and steady, and moving with grace.
(which is limited I've seen little to nothing.)

Hm, here's a suggestion, having somewhat faster reflexes. If he can react faster, then maybe he can avoid falling on his ass, or at least mitigate any pain because he was able to brace himself. Not very sexual, I know, but, I'm starting off relatively "safe".

Great concept ! I have a question about the wishes, in stead of asking for unlimited funds, would it be possible to wish for a severe discount on things. Example: Scootaloo needs/wants some expensive new piece of scooter equipment, so Taps wishes to find one on sale. Would that work? Also, say he was involved in a raffle, would he be able to affect the outcome of the draw?

Hmmmm, how about for the next two wishes Apple Bloom forgets what happened and he gets to see Scootaloo in a risque pose?

8814452 This is a definite yes on the discount part. For the raffle, he could increase his odds, but it depends on the scale, so he could make sure he wins a small club raffle, but would have no effect on winning the lottery.

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I'm sure if he wished for their fertility to be increased that'd work. They would still be a chance it wouldn't take though. Not sure he could use all three wishes to triple the effect either given how the rules seem to be.

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Yeah, he'd have to wish for it to heal faster, which would likely increase his body's natural healing factor.

I made my comment to be a 'brat' basically. I get how it works.

Sadly given how it works it's pretty much killed my interest in this. It's just far to limiting for any fun to be really had.

Like it sounds like he couldn't even increase Applebloom's cup size if he wanted, or if he did, it'd be a temporary thing which kinda defeats the purpose.

If the purpose is to just get him with the CMC, then just have him wish to increase his confidence and talk to them. Problem solved.

8814846 I will say this now: That will not solve the problem.

Im interested... Please continue

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Well no, but I'm not sure if it's because of what the problem is, or if simply you don't want that to be a solution, but I feel it'd be a good first step.

I'm guessing it's more the first one. I'm fairly certain you have an 'idea' for how this is all set up, but the fact is I feel we don't have any REAL input, and that kinda turns me off.

It's like being told there is character customization in a videogame, but all we can really do is change the color of various parts on them.

Wish: Go in a date with one of the C.M.C.

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One at a time !


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How about for one day or week he is a mare, and everpony thinks he has always been a mare !

you have my attention; i can't think of a wish that hasn't been suggested already but i'll be look forward to the next chapter :scootangel:

Comment posted by wiccanminnesota deleted Mar 24th, 2018

Bit of a meta wish:
Who's voice informed me about that wish I made?

Also, are we (as in, a single reader) limited to one wish per chapter? And are only wishes from the previous chapter considered (if there are any, of course)

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I think you replied to the wrong comment

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Can't, author says transformation is out. Most I think he could do is wish to look girly, or pass as a girl and it would kinda work for however long such a thing lasts.

Like I'm pretty sure he could make Sweetie or Applebloom go up a cup size, but it'd wear off in a day or so.

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Oh, sorry I didn't even know that I had replied to the wrong comment let alone that this person that wrote this story was banned I won't reply to any other comments then again I am very sorry about all the confusion

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I am the rite one, jest not the rite comment

Comment posted by wiccanminnesota deleted Mar 24th, 2018

I'd think what would make a great next chapter would be Tender Wishes Road Rage, or Trying to Steal Away Rarity or Applejack because he has the Apple (No Pun Intended) of Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo. And, I'd think it would extend into a Dusk Shine Scenario where Tender Taps makes the collected lid of Equestia be flipped on its head.

CLIIIFF HANGER! HANGING FROM A CLIIIFFF! AND THATS WHY HE'S FALLED CLIFF HANGER!! https://youtu.be/heNeBhRpq7Y

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Oh, alright I'll pm you questions and comments to help with the story so that you won't get in trouble again.

8817517 You were not why in the slightest. What made you think that?

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Because some of my comments had adult themes in them so I thought I was the one that got you banned for asking stuff like that. But I made a comment on your latest blog that has a website on it that you might want to check out. Its a website that I belong to so if you have any questions please let me know and I'll help as best as I can.

8817543 I've heard of it before, and I've now sent for an invitation, but no. Adult comments on an adult story is absolutely fine, so you didn't need to delete them.

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