8817261
Oh, alright I'll pm you questions and comments to help with the story so that you won't get in trouble again.

8817517 You were not why in the slightest. What made you think that?

8817531
Because some of my comments had adult themes in them so I thought I was the one that got you banned for asking stuff like that. But I made a comment on your latest blog that has a website on it that you might want to check out. Its a website that I belong to so if you have any questions please let me know and I'll help as best as I can.

8817543 I've heard of it before, and I've now sent for an invitation, but no. Adult comments on an adult story is absolutely fine, so you didn't need to delete them.

8817549
alright well, thanks for clearing that very bad misunderstanding up. I look very much forward to reading your work on archiveofourown.org
once I am able to get a new editor I'll be posting Celestia's military story and Eventides stories to that site rather than doing it with this one. I hope you enjoy working with Archive as they are much more lenient with the adult stuff then what appears to be done here on this website.

8817565 It was just a matter of cover art which has to do with adsense problems more than anything I believe especially with some of the stricter parts of the guidelines.

8817571
So are you going to change the cover art then?

8817575 The cover arts that were in question have been taken down at this point. This one is fine. Also, I will say that if you wish to keep worrying about this, please PM me. This is a story and the comments are meant for commenting about it and giving suggestions, not my account issues.

intriguing i am curious what happens next

8817583
oh, sorry about that. anyhow about the story. Do you think it is possible for Tender Hoof to use his powers to help the CMC find a lost friend or perhaps misplaced items such as a comic book that Scoots really likes to give a sense of comedy to the story?

8817589 Yes, though, while the finding a new friend could be neat, other such things would possibly be a bit too mundane. Sorry.

8817591
What about using his powers to help Scootaloo fly such as he could levitate her and give her the feeling of flying for a few hours each day or night depending on how he is feeling at the time being.

8817595 Possible for something sweet.

SB is adorasexy AF

SL: Sweetie, that’s because they’re going to jerk off to your breasts, just like I bet Apple Bloom was doing last night.

Continue, Scootaloo

Would a wish like "all the girls in his class want to dress a bit sexier—dress to impress!" work?

Less than seeing one of his friends' bare breasts, but more victims, and with the other fellows also getting some beneft out of it.

This was a very good chapter.
Tender is a sweet guy and he deserve a bit luck in his life.
I have a feeling Scootalo will try something next :3

Wish: To do what the C.M.C. are doing and say about him why he isn't there ?

Tender: *like a ghost he see the CMCs having a sleep over*

SL: "No way did you let him put his hands on here breasts"

SB: "I did, I tock my top off" *tack her top off* "and he placed his hands like this" *she tacks SL hands and puts them on her breasts like Tender's were*

...

AB: "Yall think he mite find my breasts better then SB ?" *tack her shirt off, and gets next to SB*

*AB & SB compers breasts size*

SB: "Which one do you think are better, SL ?"

SL: "Pfff.. Breasts size are SO over rated" *shy said will looking down at her smaller breasts*

Can he which for one day or a week, he looks like a mare (or ever pony thinks he is one) and they think he has always been the 4th CMC girl ?

Wish: that SL can fly
SL gets Flying-Scooter or a Scooter made of Couds

Wish: They could go on a date, (for jest one day)
For one day the CMCs are colts that are dating him.

Wish: that he ... (that they CMCs are trited like princess)
A horn or wings starts growing on him or one of the CMCs

Wish: Wants to have a Pool party
Him and his friends play pool

Wish: Wants to have the moves
Not the moves he was thinking of

Wish (for half way in the story): I want each CMCs to get one of my wish for today
They wish for something else that he was think.

Wish (for the end of the story: That the CMCs find love
2 of them fall in love with one and other, the 3rd one falls in love with him

“Second wish, granted. One more remaining.”

Thing with wishes, you gotta be careful about how you phrase them.

Sweetie fidgeted for a moment before smiling up at him. It was her broad, excited smile, despite her bright red cheeks, and she chirped out, “I would really like that. Just remember to be tender with them, okay?”

Ah, because his name. Clever.

SL: Yes I have, and your web history is the cleanest thing I’ve ever seen. What do you get off on, stealing Rarity’s books?

It's called incognito mode. But, probably.

I figured I'd give this a try, though not sure if I'll be doing this right.

Since you had bloom the first chapter and sweetie the second I'm going to assume scoots will be the focus of the next one.

So maybe Scootaloo After the Skype chat decides To Hang Out With Him To Try And sneak A Peek.

So for The first wish maybe have it be after Scootaloo is teasing him a bit about messing up a move and have him wish Scootaloo would realize how much it bothers him.

She feels bad and offers to take him out for ice cream her treat.

while out she keeps trying to sneak a glance, but tender doesn't realize this, just that She s acting odd, so his second wish is that he knew what she was trying to do.

Scootaloo ends up blurting out that she was trying to check him out, and in doing so ends up spilling ice cream in her shirt. She offers to show him her breasts if he gives her a peak. His last wish is to give him the courage to be able to show her, at least for this moment.

Just my thought s, let me know if that's too detailed

Scootaloo seems completely unfazed by what the other CMC have said about what happened with Tender; maybe he can go see her later and talk about it with her, so if nothing else just to let out some frustration in a "judge free" zone, but maybe tomorrow so he can use a wish so on someone who maybe is already more inclined to go bit farther then the last two

Will that went well. hmm, now what to do.

Perhaps a wish for a (however, slight.) boost of interest from the girls in his newly acquired skill in messages.

Is it possible to use wishes to compile on increasing a skill per day? If so perhaps another (slight) empowerment to his newly gained skill.

I wanna see Scoots get her eye full

8818025 It would be a one day thing and likely consume all three of his wishes due to the strength of it. Doing it to one person though, minus like Fluttershy, would work though.

Also, remember that he's graduated now!

8818199 Yeah, pretty much ALL of that are way too big for this game, sorry. He does small wishes while you're thinking major world changing stuff for pretty strong magical stuff.

Remember, I took down a chapter of gamer's journal because gender bending was too far.

8818220 This sort of description for the wishes can work, and it shows your intent, which I do like. I'll keep it in mind, but likely change it too if I go with it.

8818283 Yeah, I didn't make it clear, but he'll lose the boost at the end of the day, sorry.

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How about... read-minds ?

For one day ever mare has one cup bigger
the next day there back to what the were ones

Can we have him (for one day) that he is trited like one of the girls ?

For one day he doesn't fall

He goes to the bitch with the CMCs

He knows how to Cook

neither him nor the CMC has to sleep for one day.

Ever time that he Touch a boob he fils like it is his boob. (you know what I mean ?)

The CMCs and him get a boost in the salary

8818907 I like the Beach, Sleep, and Cook ones, as they can be fun chapters, some of them can be combined, and some of them can lead to new things for him.

Definitely like what I've read so far, and I have a few suggestions for wishes for tomorrow.
First, he wishes to get a similar situation to what he got with Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle with Scootaloo (either getting to lay hands on her or see her naked, in a scenario where she won't hold it against him.)
If this ends with him running away in embarrassment from his hard on again, he could wish that he didn't get so embarrassed over that (however, I get the feeling these wishes are more 'chain of events' wishes than 'manipulate people' wishes).
If it works by actually making him not be as embarrassed about it, third wish should be knowing what the CMC think of him (worried about how what happened affects their view of him).
If it works by having Scootaloo trying to comfort him, third wish should be that he doesn't have to risk making the first move in these situations.

Just remember to be tender with them, okay?

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8822179 That is fucking amazing.

8821245
Very well thought out. I second the motion!

8822225
Some ideas if he wants to change his appearance at some point that might be low enough power to grant.
1. If Twilight ever works on permanent body alterations, let me be the volunteer she experiments with. (Either monkey paw it and have her spell fail in some way or have him wish for numerous situations which will slowly drive her to think of it more.)
2. Adjust my metabolism and/or appetite and/or some other bodily function so that I lose the softness/fat that is making me look femanim without affecting my health.
3. I wish I had some knowledge/book/body that would tell me how to exercise so that I would look less feminine.

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I would like the story but I'm hesitant to keep freezing it because you ever track record of not finishing multi-part stories.

8831430 I can entirely understand that, and that only got worse with me going more and more into original fiction. I'm sorry.