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TankCop


Lover of Adult Foal Fics and ADBL Pony stuff.

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Comment posted by Galaxy of Equestria deleted Feb 4th, 2018

awww poor dash hope she can explain more and get out or just go with it and see what happen to her

Did I just witness a filly shave a grown mare? Never thought of that one before. :rainbowderp:

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hahaha! It was something not often seen indeed. I thought it would be more interesting to have it in there even in a small way.

I never wanted to make this a full foalcon type fic. But a few sexual referances short of a full sexual act is good.

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Just wait and see Dash's ordeal is just beginning! ^_^

Well, this was an interesting read, a little repetitive in the writing style but becomes better as it go along. Keep it up

YAY more humiliation fics. I don't know why these are so rare. keep it up and I'm hoping to really see dash blush a lot.

I do really want to see rainbow dash get her mouth washed out with soap. Look forwards to more suffering and babying of rainbow dash.

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Had to do a little world building on the new OC character's world as the story went on to better make way for her place in the series as the story goes on.

Happy you liked it chapter 2 is on its way. Thank you for your support.

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Oh she will on BOTH sides of her checks if you get me. Trust me what happened to her in chapter 1 will seem a blessing to what I have in store for her in chapter 2.

Be sure to keep your eyes open when it arrives and thank you for your support.

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I am 100% promise you that Sprinkle Gem will make good on that promise come chapter 2 and as well as do much more with the help of her filly friends (As seen in the posted image to this series) as well. The suffering and babying of Dashie has only begun!

You have some tense issues and some grammar problems but nothing a proof-reader can’t fix! I love the comic so a like and a watch from me!

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I am happy you liked my fic. More to come ^_^

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I really like how this starts out. This story definitely has lots of potential. Something tells me poor adorable wittle Dashie isn't gonna have a clean diapee for very long. I can only imagine all the attention she'll receive after she truly becomes a wittle "Miss Tinkle Bottom." :rainbowlaugh:
If there is more to come like you said then I will DEFINITELY be waiting patiently.

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In more ways then one I can promise you. Already started work on my next chapter. I hope to have to done before the end of this month. Not always easy for me to find free time to focus my thoughts but I will do the best I can for you and everyone else.

Thank you for your support. ^_^

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Comment posted by marinus18 deleted Apr 1st, 2018

holy crap i love foaldom, i look forward to your next chapter, and know you've earned a fan.

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Awww thank you! ^_^

I just edited part of my next fic. I only got a little bit more to go. A lot more foaldom and humilieation to come ^_^

So far so good. I await the next chapter, whenever it may come out.

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Sorry for the long wait. I got about half of the fic done already. I am waffling between 3 fic projects right now. One is the 2nd part of this. The 2nd is my 3rd part of my Adventure series. The last one is a new Celestia spanking fetish one-shot story.

I promise it will be done soon as I can. I want it to be work the wait. I will be sure to contact you with a link soon as its up.

Thank you for your support.

It would be great if they had a tea party with Rainbow Dash!

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Well you could suggest it for the 3rd part? I am going to make the last part open to all suggestions. I want to see what idea's you all have for the end of the series.

I really liked the setup for this story, and am eager for what's to come. It has the potential to become my all-time favorite padded pony fic. It's been tough waiting this long, but I know you still haven't forgotten about it, and that's enough to keep me patient. Take all the time you need.

As much fun as it is seeing Raimbow in this predicament, I do hope she is able to escape. Maybe after escaping she comes to enjoy the diaper feeling and returns every so often to be a foal again.

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I did put in a note that if you want to share your idea's for how the next chapter could go I would love to read them and possably add them into the next chapter itself.

Hmmm, not a bad idea. That's something to think about.

Thank you for your idea DJSkywalker

i liked this chapter. I'm thinking dash obviously baby talked but also thinking her tongue and jaw get sore from the gag and ends up baby babbling for a while and they all sort of cuddle dash while one read there dolly a story. or they get all of sprinkle gems dolls and hold a dolly baby pageant having the other girls each puppeteer the other dolly's for how they think a good foal should act and how they want dash to act.
just my idea on what would be cute to see ^.^

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Some good stuff there to maybe add into the next chapter.

Happy you enjoyed the fic. Thank you for your comment as well as your ideas. :rainbowkiss:

Comment posted by Indigo Tornado deleted Aug 15th, 2018
Comment posted by Indigo Tornado deleted Aug 16th, 2018

I get the feeling that Sprinkle Gem is eventually going to end up getting in trouble for all this.

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Its very possably, just hve to wait & see, thank you for your comment & support

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No ones perfect

Also do u have any ideas for the next chapter u would like to see?

Comment posted by Zubric deleted Aug 16th, 2018

Mouth soaping for those curse words. And some timeouts in the corner.

Great story and great chapter!

Perhaps you could have Scootaloo get involved somehow by either rescueing Rainbow Dash or getting herself put in diapers and being in the same situation as RD.

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Hmmm possably something like that could happen in a later part of the series? I will keep it in mind.

Thank u for your comment

There are a number of grammar issues, but I'm enjoying the story regardless. I'd love to see a scene like in the cover pic where Dash is stuck having all five fillies playing with her, passing her between them with their magic, changing her even when she doesn't need a change just for the sake of playing with her, etc.

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I am doing my best to edit and improve, i will often make a few mistakes i hope to improve over time.

Ah a well thought of idea indeed, thank u

The question brought both confusion and a tiny bit of worry to the older maid mares face.

Lastly there was a large foal sized high chair upon which to feed the Miss Rainbow Tinkle Bottom when she got hungry. It had a snap-locking tray that would attach for quick and easy feed.

Just a rule of thumb, if you already established that the mare is a maid, you don't have to state she a maid every time she is mentioned in the same scene.
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Lastly, there was a large high chair upon which the filly could feed the Miss Rainbow Tinkle Bottom when she got hungry. It had a snap-locking tray that would attach for quick and easy feedings.

Large foal sized...basically saying it large but yet foal sized it contradicts. Oversized would have been a better word for example.

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Yes i see these mistakes alot better now.

Thank u for your helpful advice that i will try to better myself next time.

Thank you for your openness and your time to look over my work.

This chapter was great, definitely worth the wait in my opinion!

Not sure what you already have planned or have in mind. Maybe all the fillies getting involved in a diaper change would be fun or Rainbow misbehaving somehow and accidentally hurts one of the friends, even if it’s just a small bump, making two fillies spank each cheek with a brush or something?

Anyways, good luck writing the next chapter!

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O_O.....Oh my :trollestia: thats a brilliant idea! Thank you

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Really?! Glad you thought it was a good idea! I was worried that I might give ideas that you had planned already. :twilightsheepish:

Hahaha, poor Dashie just can't catch a break can she? And it looks like it'll only get worse from here on out! Looking really good buddy, keep up the good work.

As for a suggestion, Why not have Sprinkle Gem and her friends feed Dash, with each of them picking a different baby food to make her choke down?

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