Spring Vacation [Commission]

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Yosh-E-O

Yosh-E-O #1 · Jul 30th, 2017 · 4 · ·

What a series of unfortunate events for Scoots. Goes to show that being lazy does come back to get you. especially if you feel like taking the time to use the potty at night is too much effort.

The story flowed very well with the transitions in the daycare being quite natural. Ms. Sunflower's personality was also quite good. She is out to help educate those foals under her charge. Not encourage them to think some pony will always gladly stop what they are doing to change a diaper.

Nicely done commission.

NinetailsCreativity

NinetailsCreativity #2 · Jul 31st, 2017 · 1 · ·

This one is cute I'm excited to read more and I agree with Yosh-E-O about Ms sunflower such a great idea for the rules.

Midnight Shadows

Midnight Shadows #3 · Aug 1st, 2017 · · ·

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Thanks!

Carpinus Caroliniana

Carpinus Caroliniana #4 · Aug 1st, 2017 · 2 · ·

I have to admit, Scootaloo's laziness coming back to get her was a pretty good way to get her padded up.

Grammar's good and everything flows perfectly and naturally.

I am amused that Scootaloo was mistaken for a a foal even though she was a schoolfilly. She must be a very small schoolfilly or Ms. Sunflower has seen some large foals.

Midnight Shadows

Midnight Shadows #5 · Aug 1st, 2017 · 1 · ·

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I like to think Scootaloo is fairly small for her age, same with Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle. I mean it wouldn't be that uncommon for them to be a bit behind on their growth a bit. I mean sure she'd probably be bigger than most of the other foals but some foals can probably get bigger too. I'm vaguely using an irl reference from when I was in elementary. In my. . . idk 4th grade class some of the kids still looked like they could have been in kindergarten if you had no context, so I'm kinda applying the 'no context' part of that to Scootaloo. Mainly because it makes her easier to diaper. . . Also probably because I have a bit of a headcannon that Scootaloo's mom was very ill or dying when she was born leading to stunted growth from Scootaloo.

But yeah, I try my best!

Kichi

Kichi #6 · Nov 25th, 2020 · · ·

I wonder what is going to happen when the parents or her aunts return... Is Scootaloo going to hide everything? Or is she going to tell what happened and put Sunflower in problems?

Midnight Shadows

Midnight Shadows #7 · Nov 26th, 2020 · · ·

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I wrote this with the headcannon that Scootaloo lives with Rainbow Dash, was written before Scootaloo's family life was not explored yet.

Kichi

Kichi #8 · Nov 26th, 2020 · · ·

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And I guess Rainbow Dash will be busy those two weeks and the crusaders the same so they will not notice that Scootaloo is being diapered

Midnight Shadows

Midnight Shadows #9 · Nov 27th, 2020 · · ·

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Well the premise is she was supposed to be doing a favor for Cheerilee to get her grades up or something to that effect by volunteering at a daycare on the far side of town during spring break, some liberties are taken here such as the town is a little bit bigger than perceived in the show so traveling to the far side is going to somewhere less traveled by her and her friends. This leaves the door open for something like this story, during the daycare hours, she will be in diapers and pullups, and she has a bedwetting problem. I highly doubt she'd tell anyone after leaving the daycare that she was put in diapers and treated like a foal, she'd probably get the diaper off as soon as she left. So no one would find out. All of this is inferred by reading the story.

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