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TankCop


Lover of Adult Foal Fics and ADBL Pony stuff.

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Haven’t even read but the tags made me go AAHH!!!!

9731962
I hope the fic itself will only add to that. lol :trollestia:

Great cornertime scene, needs the nose against be all portion which you displayed awesomely. I’m not one to enjoy her Changing body, but it makes sense in any kind of real sense and of course authors likings. Maybe she’ll tell him sometime and he’ll punish the princess as she is.

But there would be a good opportunity for her to have a public punishment if she is disguised.

9731968
maybe an idea for return in the possible future? Anything's possible?

9731966
thanks for the kind words.

It is possible? We will just have to see if this could bare some other fruit later on?

Writing is a little sloppy, and I'm not really a fan of the whole mind control thing. But, having said that, its still nice to see another spanking fic. Not nearly enough pony spanking fics to go around.

9731993
well I know I am not a prefect writer but I do my best. There's always room for improvement.

I just got inspired all of a sudden and made this in less then a day. I am still happy how it came out.

Thanks for your kind words. If you want to see more MLP spanking related stuff Please consider joining my group. I will be happy to send you a invite.

>mouth soaping
I mean, I don't doubt it's a thing, but points for the first time I've seen it in a dominance play aspect.

9732010
There's a lot of age play games that use it as a added punishment with spankings.

Its more common then one would think.

Still I am happy you enjoy the fic and thank you for the comment.

Comment posted by RarityEQM deleted Jul 15th, 2019

I just started reading your story and I just want to say you have idea that other either don't think of or shy away from 9/10

9732839
Thank you very kindly for your kind words and for taking the time to read my work. :rainbowkiss:

9733064
Any plans on continue this people really like it and I for one think it would be a great to see Celestia publicly punish like a foal but it up to you

9733069
I might make a sequal or add-on to this and make it a series in the possible future?

For now I do have other stories that require my attation. Like my Dolly Dash series. If you didn't read that one yet please do its quite good.

9733075
I have and like where it heading

9733088
Its soon to have a new chapter. Very soon in fact.

Idea: Celestia gets a dragon to think he adopted her, and has him give her the worst/best spanking she’d have yet

There were a few rushed points.

I also would like if more emotions other than sex would appear in Celestia's head. Maybe the spanking reminds her of when she actually was a filly. Maybe her filly body causes her to feel legitimate fear of the bigger stallion.
I would also think the simple sense of fear would be a big part of the appeal for Celestia. Normally she is all powerful and while there are things she fears it's a different type of fear. It's a stressful fear, things she has to keep in mind forever and can never fully go away.
This is a comforting kind of fear. Directed towards 1 thing that only has your best interest at heart.

I think adding a wider range of emotions would help adding some dept to it.

It was during the last years Summer Sun Celebration when she was taking a break from the festivities to get a slice of cake that she saw a little filly getting a spanking from her father. The way he would talk down to her making her feel ashamed of whatever naughty thing she did really excited the Princess.

She was eager to feel that kind of thing herself. She started small at first. She would try to get the guards to talk down to her at times. This just made the guards feel uncomfortable and even required a harassment lawsuit to be brought up when the Princess demanded that one of the guards to call her a “Naughty little filly slut” then commanded him to slap her ass over and over again!

At one point she even tried self-spanking with a paddle to her large rump. However one day when Luna walked in on her at the most wrong possible moment ended this event in the most awkward of way possible! Good thing both sisters agreed to never speak of this event again and that was the end of Celestia’s self-spanking forever.

Some parts are a little hard to believe. Like Celestia suddenly getting a fetish like that. I would think it would be something that had been a part of her for much longer. Not necessarily spankings but a desire to submit and a desire to feel loved by a superior. I would also think that because of that self-spankings just wouldn't do much for her. After all it's the dominance that she really desires and not the physical pain.

sequel!!!

9915920
in the planning faze.

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