awww poor dash hope she can explain more and get out or just go with it and see what happen to her

Did I just witness a filly shave a grown mare? Never thought of that one before.

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hahaha! It was something not often seen indeed. I thought it would be more interesting to have it in there even in a small way.

I never wanted to make this a full foalcon type fic. But a few sexual referances short of a full sexual act is good.

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Just wait and see Dash's ordeal is just beginning! ^_^

Well, this was an interesting read, a little repetitive in the writing style but becomes better as it go along. Keep it up

YAY more humiliation fics. I don't know why these are so rare. keep it up and I'm hoping to really see dash blush a lot.

I do really want to see rainbow dash get her mouth washed out with soap. Look forwards to more suffering and babying of rainbow dash.

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Had to do a little world building on the new OC character's world as the story went on to better make way for her place in the series as the story goes on.

Happy you liked it chapter 2 is on its way. Thank you for your support.

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Oh she will on BOTH sides of her checks if you get me. Trust me what happened to her in chapter 1 will seem a blessing to what I have in store for her in chapter 2.

Be sure to keep your eyes open when it arrives and thank you for your support.

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I am 100% promise you that Sprinkle Gem will make good on that promise come chapter 2 and as well as do much more with the help of her filly friends (As seen in the posted image to this series) as well. The suffering and babying of Dashie has only begun!

You have some tense issues and some grammar problems but nothing a proof-reader can’t fix! I love the comic so a like and a watch from me!

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I am happy you liked my fic. More to come ^_^

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I really like how this starts out. This story definitely has lots of potential. Something tells me poor adorable wittle Dashie isn't gonna have a clean diapee for very long. I can only imagine all the attention she'll receive after she truly becomes a wittle "Miss Tinkle Bottom."
If there is more to come like you said then I will DEFINITELY be waiting patiently.

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In more ways then one I can promise you. Already started work on my next chapter. I hope to have to done before the end of this month. Not always easy for me to find free time to focus my thoughts but I will do the best I can for you and everyone else.

Thank you for your support. ^_^

holy crap i love foaldom, i look forward to your next chapter, and know you've earned a fan.

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Awww thank you! ^_^

I just edited part of my next fic. I only got a little bit more to go. A lot more foaldom and humilieation to come ^_^

So far so good. I await the next chapter, whenever it may come out.

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Sorry for the long wait. I got about half of the fic done already. I am waffling between 3 fic projects right now. One is the 2nd part of this. The 2nd is my 3rd part of my Adventure series. The last one is a new Celestia spanking fetish one-shot story.

I promise it will be done soon as I can. I want it to be work the wait. I will be sure to contact you with a link soon as its up.

Thank you for your support.

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I’m a patient man, so that’s fine.

It would be great if they had a tea party with Rainbow Dash!

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Well you could suggest it for the 3rd part? I am going to make the last part open to all suggestions. I want to see what idea's you all have for the end of the series.

I really liked the setup for this story, and am eager for what's to come. It has the potential to become my all-time favorite padded pony fic. It's been tough waiting this long, but I know you still haven't forgotten about it, and that's enough to keep me patient. Take all the time you need.

The question brought both confusion and a tiny bit of worry to the older maid mares face.

Lastly there was a large foal sized high chair upon which to feed the Miss Rainbow Tinkle Bottom when she got hungry. It had a snap-locking tray that would attach for quick and easy feed.

Just a rule of thumb, if you already established that the mare is a maid, you don't have to state she a maid every time she is mentioned in the same scene.
Could be

Lastly, there was a large high chair upon which the filly could feed the Miss Rainbow Tinkle Bottom when she got hungry. It had a snap-locking tray that would attach for quick and easy feedings.

Large foal sized...basically saying it large but yet foal sized it contradicts. Oversized would have been a better word for example.