On a calm and snowy night, just a few days before Hearth's Warming, Spike decides to check up on Twilight to see if she's doing okay.
Twilight has been through much hardship recently, but thankfully, over the past year she's gotten much better since. However, with fears still lingering in Spike's mind, he wants to be absolutely certain that Twilight's improved well-being stays that way.
And he'll do it by doing what he does best at. By being right by her side. There for her. Always.
Teen Rating: A moment of strong language.
Thank you all so much for taking the time to read this. You're criticism is much appreciated 
ARTWORK by: Seabridge Drive THANK YOU!
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This is very cute, I have to say that such stories are just the thing you would wish to happen in real life. But they don't occur as often as you would like to. Sometimes never, and sometimes just once.
Wow that was amazing.
This has to be one of the best written pieces that I have ever read, and I think that it is amazing. It really gives you a warmth in your heart that a Hearth's Warming story should.
10/10, Have a 'stache
The only criticism that 'I' can make is that it's so good that it needs a sequel…and that will probably take a while if it ever comes
This was a great work with amazing emotional moments
bit of an info dump in the beginning, i admit that u had to set the scene and such, but still...
well, this is one of the best thing I've read in a while, plus points for spikelight shipping. wouldn't mind hearing more if the two of them
Absolutely loved this. Insta-faved and tracked in the hopes that you make another chapter and/or sequel
This was absolutely wonderful. I've always loved the TwiSpike shipping, which we don't seem to see as often, and this was just the perfect way to do it. When I read Spike's speech, and he was mentioning how he hopes Twilight's future husband would be, I knew that those characteristics were very much Spike's own - he is the ideal husband for Twilight! All in all, a very emotional and heartwarming piece, perfect for Hearth's Warming Eve that is coming up in both this story and in real life (if your headcanon is that it takes place around the same time as Christmas.)
Wow I haven't read something like that in a long while. That was amazing just beautiful.
The story is not bad (what I've seen of it so far, and I intend to keep on reading), but in first-person especially, shifting between past and present tenses when both clearly describe the action happening "right now" (i.e. the past tense segments aren't flashbacks) is an immersion breaker of the first class. And this story is among the worst offenders for that I've seen in the feature box in quite a while.
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Oh my God I'm sweating from my eyes. What is this.
Well this was amazing, well done sir.
Though a few things. I would try adding a few commas here and there, some sentences flow a little badly, along with other punctuation. Oh, and these:
His.
Too.
Council.
Cadance.
And now I also want to see their friends' reaction to the pairing.
Me sees a TwiSpike fic
>.>
<.<
Adds to faves
10/10 for the feels.
Few! It's amazing writers can write stories this long in a week. I'll admit I first I wasn't sure how I felt about the concept but as I read on I got more into the story itself. Personally I'll give it a 4/5 just because the beginning section didn't "grab me" but still very well done. Heck I'm not necessarily a fan of TwiSpike but it was emotional and has a lot of the "feels". Keep up the good work. And good writing takes time so don't feel bad if it takes more time to make a spectacular story.
I loved it! All of it! Great job!
It's a nice story, but please, dude, get yourself an editor to help improve the actual writing quality . .
Your and You're for example . . it just grates on me x.x
That was a great story and it really gave me some feels. I hope you continue to write more stories as I would certainly look forward to it.
Fluttershy and Thunderlane... Discord gets jelly and turns into Bill Cipher.
(Ha! No one thought of THAT twist yet!)
I couldn't help shedding tears at how well you wrote these two characters out so well. It's so heart-warming, and very very beautiful; not to mention touching. You did a wonderful job, and have you my condolences to your Grandmother. I know how hard it is to get over grief such as this, since I too, lost my grandfather a couple years ago. It was painful, but I still remember him as the loving grandfather I always knew.
This was an amazing story. The characters are well written and enjoyable. Bravo!
I...I want more o.....O
Well done great story. Makes my best story bookshelf
...I would really love to see a part 2 to this, preferably where they tell everyone they are together...
Good.
I've tried to read this story three times, because I really like the concept. Each time, however, I have to stop because there are so many errors. There are a number of grammatical errors, and even more instaces where sentances just feel awkward. I want to like this story, but it is very difficult for me to overcome these issues. GET AN EDITOR. If this was cleaned up I could see it as one of my favorites. As is, I can't even finish it.
It’s these little gems that keep me going. Thank you
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cute pic.
Thank you for the compliment
Probably a story that you'd only see in the movies. It'd only make since considering that's what I want to do
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Thank you SO much I appreciate it
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Wow. Like, really? I'd like to think the story is good but what you said REALLY touches my heart
Thank you
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Don't get me wrong. I'd actually like to do one. Definitely. Buuuuut if my last semester of college was any indication that may not happen for awhile. I'm really sorry 
Heh. Yeah. Sequel. Right.
Thank you for believing that my story is actually worth having a sequel made though
Thank you 
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With the way I wanted the story to go and at the time of writing it, I felt like there was no avoiding it. But as I look back I believe I could've done some things differently to make it feel less smothering and overwhelming. 
Yeah. I feel you there
But I do hope you liked THE REST of the story
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Thank you. I hope to make more for the two of them
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Though if I do make a sequel it'll probably be a separate story on its own but thanks for wanting to keep track 
Thanks for the fave. I'm glad you enjoyed it
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And eeyup. That's exactly what I intended for in Spike's speech. A perfect couple for two best friends 
Thank you. I really wanted to make this as emotionally satisfying as best I could and I'm glad to that it has for quite a few
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Thank you SO much I'm glad you enjoyed it
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I understand completely as I look back. If you read my blog it explains WHY this story was SO poorly edited and rushed. Again I'm not used writing ANYTHING this long and/or ANYTHING in story format. I mostly jot down ideas and write script format for movies. At least we both agree that it was 'unbelievable' that this story found its way in the feature box 
though for different reasons 
SSSIIIIIIIGGGGGHHHHHH yeah.
Though I'd like to think what you thought of the STORY itself since, more than anything, I concentrated the most on
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but thank you SO SO much for taking the time to read my story 
love the gif 
I'm not sure if you actually did, but, taking your word for it, I didn't think my story would cause ANYONE to get such a reaction
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And thank you for enjoying my story 
Ah. Thank you for that. I appreciate it
Yes. I definitely would like to see their reactions as well
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Yeah. They definitely CAN make for a nice pair 
But I do hope you enjoyed my story 
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definitely not my editing 
Well i'm glad THAT'S what I got a perfect score on
Thank you so much. I'm glad you loved it
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Yeah. I understand how you feel. I hope I can explain more in a blog but for the longest time I was against any TWISPIKE fic. So i'm glad that despite the concept you read it anyway and not only that but loved it as well. For that I truly appreciate it. Thank you
With the beginning, it was supposed to start slow. Since this was in Spike's perspective, to him, this was just 'another day'. There had to be NO WAY for him to indicate that he was gonna think of Twilight's depression or anything that happens in the rest of the story. So for me, I had to start somewhere. But yeah, I could've done better
Thank you for your thoughts
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Well thank you for your comment. All of it!
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But yeah I know what you mean. Thing is, since i'm new to all this I don't know where or even HOW to look for an editor. I'm that lost 
I just I ask for your understanding. My blog explains WHY this was so poorly edited.
Well it grates me that my editing grates you. I'd hate for anyone to get grated on
But I do hope you liked the story at least and if there's any pointers there I'm all ears. Along with everything else
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Thanks. I'm glad to get your feelings going
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It's a sin that I know who Bill Cipher is...but haven't seen Gravity Falls yet
There are a few FlutterLane stories that I really enjoyed and hope to see more of if I'm being honest
But I do hope you enjoyed the story itself
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especially after going through this recent Christmas. I'm sorry about your grandfather as well. I hope he's resting peace. 
Thank you for your sympathy. Definitely wasn't easy
Thank you for enjoying my story too. That was a big fear of mine
I REALLY wanted to capture the characters of Twi and Spike so much. I knew it was gonna make or break the story and I'm glad to see it has made it well 
Thanks again for sharing your thoughts
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Thank you. I'm REALLY glad to hear the characters held up well
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O...okay. I'll try O_O
Glad you enjoyed it
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Awesome. Thank you so much. I'm glad that my story was bookshelf worthy for you